linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH 2/3] connector: clean up grammar/style in documentation

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Date:	Thu, 16 Jul 2009 10:15:43 +0100
From:	Will Newton <will.newton@...il.com>
To:	Mike Frysinger <vapier@...too.org>
Cc:	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Evgeniy Polyakov <zbr@...emap.net>,
	Andrew Morton <akpm@...ux-foundation.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/3] connector: clean up grammar/style in documentation

On Wed, Jul 15, 2009 at 11:14 PM, Mike Frysinger<vapier@...too.org> wrote:
> The grammar in most of this file is slightly off, and some sections are
> hard to read due to lack of visual clues breaking up related material.
>
> Signed-off-by: Mike Frysinger <vapier@...too.org>
> ---
>  Documentation/connector/connector.txt |  119 +++++++++++++++++----------------
>  1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 58 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt
> index ad6e0ba..847f0d8 100644
> --- a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt
> @@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ Kernel Connector.
>  Kernel connector - new netlink based userspace <-> kernel space easy
>  to use communication module.
>
> -Connector driver adds possibility to connect various agents using
> -netlink based network.  One must register callback and
> -identifier. When driver receives special netlink message with
> -appropriate identifier, appropriate callback will be called.
> +The Connector driver adds makes it easy to connect various agents using a
> +netlink based network.  One must register a callback and an identifier.
> +When the driver receives a special netlink message with the appropriate
> +identifier, the appropriate callback will be called.

The first line of the second paragraph still needs work, "adds" should
probably be removed.
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