linux-kernel - Re: [RFC PATCH] cmdline: Hide "debug" from /proc/cmdline

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Message-ID: <CA+ToGPF_GnnNhSUZjmbyu=5Nk=i2cTkoWPiykaO4EKJSfvNh-w@mail.gmail.com>
Date:	Mon, 19 May 2014 05:11:04 -0300
From:	Diego Viola <diego.viola@...il.com>
To:	Rusty Russell <rusty@...tcorp.com.au>
Cc:	Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>,
	Andrew Morton <akpm@...ux-foundation.org>,
	Linus Torvalds <torvalds@...ux-foundation.org>,
	Mateusz Guzik <mguzik@...hat.com>,
	Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@...uxfoundation.org>,
	Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>,
	LKML <linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org>,
	Thomas Gleixner <tglx@...utronix.de>,
	"H. Peter Anvin" <hpa@...or.com>, Borislav Petkov <bp@...en8.de>,
	Ingo Molnar <mingo@...nel.org>, Mel Gorman <mgorman@...e.de>,
	Kay Sievers <kay@...y.org>
Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH] cmdline: Hide "debug" from /proc/cmdline

I mean "e.g.:" is wrong, it should be e.g. or e.g.,

Sorry to be too nitpicky or annoying about this.

Diego

On Mon, May 19, 2014 at 5:06 AM, Diego Viola <diego.viola@...il.com> wrote:
> e.g. should be written as e.g. or e.g.,
>
> There's no need to add another colon ":" after the one that it's already there.
>
> See, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/E.g.#e.g.
>
> Please fix that.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Diego
>
> On Mon, May 5, 2014 at 9:57 PM, Rusty Russell <rusty@...tcorp.com.au> wrote:
>> Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org> writes:
>>> All looks good to me except for 2 instances of "eg" which should be
>>> "e.g." (just above and about 4 paragraphs below here).
>>
>> Thanks, fixed:
>>
>> diff --git a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt
>> index 56a4c2d0c741..a42b9dd6b46b 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/kernel-parameters.txt
>> @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ environment, others are passed as command line arguments to init.
>>  Everything after "--" is passed as an argument to init.
>>
>>  Module parameters can be specified in two ways: via the kernel command
>> -line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, eg:
>> +line with a module name prefix, or via modprobe, e.g.:
>>
>>         (kernel command line) usbcore.blinkenlights=1
>>         (modprobe command line) modprobe usbcore blinkenlights=1
>> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Hyphens (dashes) and underscores are equivalent in parameter names, so
>>  can also be entered as
>>         log-buf-len=1M print_fatal_signals=1
>>
>> -Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, eg:
>> +Double-quotes can be used to protect spaces in values, e.g.:
>>         param="spaces in here"
>>
>>  This document may not be entirely up to date and comprehensive. The command
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