Date:	Tue, 28 Jul 2015 16:54:29 +0200
From:	Peter Zijlstra <peterz@...radead.org>
To:	Vikas Shivappa <vikas.shivappa@...ux.intel.com>
Cc:	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, vikas.shivappa@...el.com,
	x86@...nel.org, hpa@...or.com, tglx@...utronix.de,
	mingo@...nel.org, tj@...nel.org, matt.fleming@...el.com,
	will.auld@...el.com, glenn.p.williamson@...el.com,
	kanaka.d.juvva@...el.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH 3/9] x86/intel_rdt: Cache Allocation documentation and
 cgroup usage guide

On Wed, Jul 01, 2015 at 03:21:04PM -0700, Vikas Shivappa wrote:

Please edit this document to have consistent spacing. Its really hard to
read this. Every time I spot a misplaced space my brain stumbles and I
need to restart.

> diff --git a/Documentation/cgroups/rdt.txt b/Documentation/cgroups/rdt.txt
> new file mode 100644
> index 0000000..dfff477
> --- /dev/null
> +++ b/Documentation/cgroups/rdt.txt
> @@ -0,0 +1,215 @@
> +        RDT
> +        ---
> +
> +Copyright (C) 2014 Intel Corporation
> +Written by vikas.shivappa@...ux.intel.com
> +(based on contents and format from cpusets.txt)
> +
> +CONTENTS:
> +=========
> +
> +1. Cache Allocation Technology
> +  1.1 What is RDT and Cache allocation ?
> +  1.2 Why is Cache allocation needed ?
> +  1.3 Cache allocation implementation overview
> +  1.4 Assignment of CBM and CLOS
> +  1.5 Scheduling and Context Switch
> +2. Usage Examples and Syntax
> +
> +1. Cache Allocation Technology(Cache allocation)
> +===================================
> +
> +1.1 What is RDT and Cache allocation
> +------------------------------------
> +
> +Cache allocation is a sub-feature of Resource Director Technology(RDT)

missing ' ' before the '('.

> +Allocation or Platform Shared resource control which provides support to
> +control Platform shared resources like L3 cache.  Currently L3 Cache is

Double ' ' after '.' -- which _can_ be correct, but is inconsistent
throughout the document.

> +the only resource that is supported in RDT.  More information can be
> +found in the Intel SDM, Volume 3, section 17.15.

Please also include the SDM revision, like June 2015.

In fact, in the June 2015 V3 17.15 is CQM, not CAT.

> +Cache Allocation Technology provides a way for the Software (OS/VMM)
> +to restrict cache allocation to a defined 'subset' of cache which may
> +be overlapping with other 'subsets'.  This feature is used when
> +allocating a line in cache ie when pulling new data into the cache.
> +The programming of the h/w is done via programming  MSRs.

Double ' ' before 'MSRs'.

> +The different cache subsets are identified by CLOS identifier (class
> +of service) and each CLOS has a CBM (cache bit mask).  The CBM is a
> +contiguous set of bits which defines the amount of cache resource that
> +is available for each 'subset'.
> +
> +1.2 Why is Cache allocation needed
> +----------------------------------
> +
> +In todays new processors the number of cores is continuously increasing,
> +especially in large scale usage models where VMs are used like
> +webservers and datacenters. The number of cores increase the number

Single ' ' after .

> +of threads or workloads that can simultaneously be run. When
> +multi-threaded-applications, VMs, workloads run concurrently they
> +compete for shared resources including L3 cache.
> +
> +The Cache allocation  enables more cache resources to be made available

Double ' ' for no apparent reason.

> +for higher priority applications based on guidance from the execution
> +environment.
> +
> +The architecture also allows dynamically changing these subsets during
> +runtime to further optimize the performance of the higher priority
> +application with minimal degradation to the low priority app.
> +Additionally, resources can be rebalanced for system throughput benefit.
> +
> +This technique may be useful in managing large computer systems which
> +large L3 cache. Examples may be large servers running  instances of

Double ' '

> +webservers or database servers. In such complex systems, these subsets
> +can be used for more careful placing of the available cache
> +resources.
> +
> +1.3 Cache allocation implementation Overview
> +--------------------------------------------
> +
> +Kernel implements a cgroup subsystem to support cache allocation.
> +
> +Each cgroup has a CLOSid <-> CBM(cache bit mask) mapping.

No ' ' before '('

> +A CLOS(Class of service) is represented by a CLOSid.CLOSid is internal

Idem, also, _no_ space after '.'

> +to the kernel and not exposed to user.  Each cgroup would have one CBM

Double space after '.'

> +and would just represent one cache 'subset'.
> +
> +The cgroup follows cgroup hierarchy ,mkdir and adding tasks to the

I'm thinking the convention is ' ' _after_ ',', not before.

> +cgroup never fails.  When a child cgroup is created it inherits the
> +CLOSid and the CBM from its parent.  When a user changes the default
> +CBM for a cgroup, a new CLOSid may be allocated if the CBM was not
> +used before.  The changing of 'l3_cache_mask' may fail with -ENOSPC once
> +the kernel runs out of maximum CLOSids it can support.
> +User can create as many cgroups as he wants but having different CBMs
> +at the same time is restricted by the maximum number of CLOSids
> +(multiple cgroups can have the same CBM).
> +Kernel maintains a CLOSid<->cbm mapping which keeps reference counter

Above you had ' ' around the arrows.

> +for each cgroup using a CLOSid.
> +
> +The tasks in the cgroup would get to fill the L3 cache represented by
> +the cgroup's 'l3_cache_mask' file.
> +
> +Root directory would have all available  bits set in 'l3_cache_mask' file

Random double ' '

> +by default.
> +
> +Each RDT cgroup directory has the following files. Some of them may be a
> +part of common RDT framework or be specific to RDT sub-features like
> +cache allocation.
> +
> + - intel_rdt.l3_cache_mask: The cache bitmask(CBM) is represented by this
> + file. The bitmask must be contiguous and would have a 1 or 2 bit
> + minimum length.
> +
> +1.4 Assignment of CBM,CLOS
> +--------------------------
> +
> +The 'l3_cache_mask' needs to be a  subset of the parent node's
> +'l3_cache_mask'. Any contiguous subset of these bits(with a minimum of 2
> +bits on hsw SKUs) maybe set to indicate the cache mapping desired. The
> +'l3_cache_mask' between 2 directories can overlap. The 'l3_cache_mask' would
> +represent the cache 'subset' of the Cache allocation cgroup. For ex: on
> +a system with 16 bits of max cbm bits, if the directory has the least
> +significant 4 bits set in its 'l3_cache_mask' file(meaning the 'l3_cache_mask'
> +is just 0xf), it would be allocated the right quarter of the Last level
> +cache which means the tasks belonging to this Cache allocation cgroup
> +can use the right quarter of the cache to fill. If it
> +has the most significant 8 bits set ,it would be allocated the left
> +half of the cache(8 bits  out of 16 represents 50%).

Random whitespace again. Also try and limit paragraphs to 5-6 lines max.

> +
> +
> +The cache portion defined in the CBM file is available to all tasks
> +within the cgroup to fill and these task are not allowed to allocate
> +space in other parts of the cache.
> +
> +1.5 Scheduling and Context Switch
> +---------------------------------
> +
> +During context switch kernel implements this by writing the
> +CLOSid (internally maintained by kernel) of the cgroup to which the
> +task belongs to the CPU's IA32_PQR_ASSOC MSR. The MSR is only written
> +when there is a change in the CLOSid for the CPU in order to minimize
> +the latency incurred during context switch.
> +
> +The following considerations are done for the PQR MSR write so that it
> +has minimal impact on scheduling hot path:
> +- This path doesnt exist on any non-intel platforms.

!x86 I think you mean, its entirely possible to have the code present
on AMD systems for instance.

> +- On Intel platforms, this would not exist by default unless CGROUP_RDT
> +is enabled.

You can enable this just fine on AMD machines.

> +- remains a no-op when CGROUP_RDT is enabled and intel hardware does not
> +support the feature.
> +- When feature is available, still remains a no-op till the user
> +manually creates a cgroup *and* assigns a new cache mask. Since the
> +child node inherits the parents cache mask , by cgroup creation there is
> +no scheduling hot path impact from the new cgroup.
> +- per cpu PQR values are cached and the MSR write is only done when
> +there is a task with different PQR is scheduled on the CPU. Typically if
> +the task groups are bound to be scheduled on a set of CPUs , the number
> +of MSR writes is greatly reduced.

Aside from many instances of random whitespace, maybe also format like:

 - point;

 - multi
   line point;

 - another
   multi
   line
   thing.

> +
> +2. Usage examples and syntax
> +============================
> +
> +To check if Cache allocation was enabled on your system
> +
> +dmesg | grep -i intel_rdt

  $ dmesg | grep -i intel_rdt

That is, whitespace before _and_ after _and_ indent, plus a prompt, to
clarify its a command and not part of the text and weirdly formatted.

> +should output : intel_rdt: Max bitmask length: xx,Max ClosIds: xx

  intel_rdt: Max bitmask length: xx

Again, wrap in whitespace and indent to set apart.

> +the length of l3_cache_mask and CLOS should depend on the system you use.
> +
> +Also /proc/cpuinfo would have rdt(if rdt is enabled) and cat_l3( if L3

Many more instances of random whitespace.

> +    cache allocation is enabled).
> +
> +Following would mount the cache allocation cgroup subsystem and create
> +2 directories. Please refer to Documentation/cgroups/cgroups.txt on
> +details about how to use cgroups.
> +
> +  cd /sys/fs/cgroup
> +  mkdir rdt
> +  mount -t cgroup -ointel_rdt intel_rdt /sys/fs/cgroup/rdt
> +  cd rdt
> +
> +Create 2 rdt cgroups
> +
> +  mkdir group1
> +  mkdir group2
> +
> +Following are some of the Files in the directory
> +
> +  ls
> +  rdt.l3_cache_mask
> +  tasks
> +

See, here you do the whitespace and indent thing, but above you didn't.
That kind of inconsistency just bugs the hell out of me.

> +Say if the cache is 2MB and cbm supports 16 bits, then setting the
> +below allocates the 'right 1/4th(512KB)' of the cache to group2

Another few random whitespace fails.

> +
> +Edit the CBM for group2 to set the least significant 4 bits.  This
> +allocates 'right quarter' of the cache.
> +
> +  cd group2
> +  /bin/echo 0xf > rdt.l3_cache_mask
> +
> +
> +Edit the CBM for group2 to set the least significant 8 bits.This
> +allocates the right half of the cache to 'group2'.
> +
> +  cd group2
> +  /bin/echo 0xff > rdt.l3_cache_mask
> +
> +Assign tasks to the group2
> +
> +  /bin/echo PID1 > tasks
> +  /bin/echo PID2 > tasks
> +
> +  Meaning now threads
> +  PID1 and PID2 get to fill the 'right half' of
> +  the cache as the belong to cgroup group2.

This doesn't want to be indented, right?

> +
> +Create a group under group2
> +
> +  cd group2
> +  mkdir group21
> +  cat rdt.l3_cache_mask
> +   0xff - inherits parents mask.

And this would show the use of the prompt ($), allows one to distinguish
between commands and output.

> +
> +  /bin/echo 0xfff > rdt.l3_cache_mask - throws error as mask has to parent's mask's subset

I'm betting you don't actually want us to type the "- ..." bit? Either
use a regular bash comment (#) to make it harmless, or format it
differently.

Because some poor sod is going to literally type that into his console
and wonder WTF just happened.

> +
> +In order to restrict RDT cgroups to specific set of CPUs rdt can be
> +comounted with cpusets.

Either RDT is in capitals or it is not, but this is silly.
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