linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] Syntactic and factual errors in the API document

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Message-ID: <20160322160030.GA4079@localhost.localdomain>
Date:	Tue, 22 Mar 2016 09:00:32 -0700
From:	Eduardo Valentin <edubezval@...il.com>
To:	"Champ, Andy" <andycham@...zon.co.uk>
Cc:	Javi Merino <javi.merino@....com>,
	"corbet@....net" <corbet@....net>,
	"durgadoss.r@...el.com" <durgadoss.r@...el.com>,
	"leo.yan@...aro.org" <leo.yan@...aro.org>,
	"kapileshwar.singh@....com" <kapileshwar.singh@....com>,
	"wni@...dia.com" <wni@...dia.com>,
	"linux-doc@...r.kernel.org" <linux-doc@...r.kernel.org>,
	"linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org" <linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Syntactic and factual errors in the API document

Hello Andy,

On Tue, Mar 22, 2016 at 12:37:25PM +0000, Andy Champ wrote:
> There are several places where the English in the document is syntactically
> invalid, or unclear. There are also one or two factual errors.
> 
> ---
>  Documentation/thermal/sysfs-api.txt | 44 ++++++++++++++++++-------------------
>  1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)

Thanks for your patch improving the documentation. I have no comments in
the text correction. The only minor is that the patch title should have
'thermal:' prefix (have a look in the git log
Documentation/thermal/sysfs-api.txt). 

Also, I will get this patch only after the merge window is finished and
my current pending patches queue has been sent and merged.

BR,

Eduardo Valentin