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Message-Id: <1494239506-8057-1-git-send-email-kbingham@kernel.org>
Date:   Mon,  8 May 2017 11:31:45 +0100
From:   Kieran Bingham <kbingham@...nel.org>
To:     Philipp Zabel <p.zabel@...gutronix.de>,
        Rob Herring <robh+dt@...nel.org>,
        Mark Rutland <mark.rutland@....com>,
        Kieran Bingham <kieran.bingham+renesas@...asonboard.com>,
        devicetree@...r.kernel.org (open list:OPEN FIRMWARE AND FLATTENED
        DEVICE TREE BINDINGS), linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org (open list)
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: of: Fix grammar usge in graph bindings

From: Kieran Bingham <kieran.bingham+renesas@...asonboard.com>

Some minor tweaks to the language and formatting used in the
documentation identified while I was reading up on the subject matter.

Signed-off-by: Kieran Bingham <kieran.bingham+renesas@...asonboard.com>
---
 Documentation/devicetree/bindings/graph.txt | 13 ++++++-------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/graph.txt b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/graph.txt
index fcb1c6a4787b..0415e2c53ba0 100644
--- a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/graph.txt
+++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/graph.txt
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ remote device, an 'endpoint' child node must be provided for each link.
 If more than one port is present in a device node or there is more than one
 endpoint at a port, or a port node needs to be associated with a selected
 hardware interface, a common scheme using '#address-cells', '#size-cells'
-and 'reg' properties is used number the nodes.
+and 'reg' properties is used to number the nodes.
 
 device {
         ...
@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ Links between endpoints
 
 Each endpoint should contain a 'remote-endpoint' phandle property that points
 to the corresponding endpoint in the port of the remote device. In turn, the
-remote endpoint should contain a 'remote-endpoint' property. If it has one,
-it must not point to another than the local endpoint. Two endpoints with their
-'remote-endpoint' phandles pointing at each other form a link between the
+remote endpoint should contain a 'remote-endpoint' property. If it has one, it
+must not point to anything other than the local endpoint. Two endpoints with
+their 'remote-endpoint' phandles pointing at each other form a link between the
 containing ports.
 
 device-1 {
@@ -110,13 +110,12 @@ device-2 {
         };
 };
 
-
 Required properties
 -------------------
 
 If there is more than one 'port' or more than one 'endpoint' node or 'reg'
-property is present in port and/or endpoint nodes the following properties
-are required in a relevant parent node:
+property present in the port and/or endpoint nodes then the following
+properties are required in a relevant parent node:
 
  - #address-cells : number of cells required to define port/endpoint
                     identifier, should be 1.
-- 
2.7.4

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