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Message-Id: <20200228143528.209db45e5f0f78474ef83387@kernel.org>
Date: Fri, 28 Feb 2020 14:35:28 +0900
From: Masami Hiramatsu <mhiramat@...nel.org>
To: Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@....de>
Cc: linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>,
Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>,
linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, kernel-janitors@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot
configuration documentation
On Thu, 27 Feb 2020 20:12:17 +0100
Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@....de> wrote:
> > +This allows administrators to pass a structured-Key configuration file
>
> Does capitalisation matter here for the word “Key”?
Oops, thanks! that's a typo of key.
> > +If you think that kernel/init options becomes too long to write in boot-loader
> > +configuration file or want to comment on each options, you can use this
>
> Can the following wording variant be a bit nicer?
>
> +… or you want to comment on each option, …
OK, since the previous sentence is too long, it is more readable to put the
subject there.
> > +Also, some subsystem may depend on the boot configuration, and it has own
> > +root key.
>
> Would you like to explain the influence of a key hierarchy any further?
Please read the example (boot time tracer) carefully :)
> > +The boot configuration syntax allows user to merge partially same word keys
> > by brace. For example::
>
> “by braces.
> For example::”?
I think current one is shorter and compact.
> > +The file /proc/bootconfig is a user-space interface to the configuration
>
> “… is an user-…”?
Hm, it seems "a user" is correct wording.
https://www.quora.com/Which-is-the-correct-usage-a-user-or-an-user
> > +Currently the maximum configuration size is 32 KiB and the total number
> > +of key-words and values must be under 1024 nodes.
>
> * How were these constraints chosen?
>
> * Can such system limits become more configurable?
No.
> > +(Note: Each key consists of words separated by dot, and value also consists
> > +of values separated by comma. Here, each word and each value is generally
> > +called a "node".)
>
> I would prefer the interpretation that nodes contain corresponding attributes.
No. Node is a node. It is merely generic.
>
> How do you think about to add a link to a formal file format description?
Oh, nice idea. Please contribute it :)
Thank you,
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Masami Hiramatsu <mhiramat@...nel.org>
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