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Message-ID: <3118d72b-a33c-e6d7-36a1-204d39d2bdbb@infradead.org>
Date: Wed, 4 Mar 2020 13:07:40 -0800
From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
To: Markus Elfring <Markus.Elfring@....de>,
Masami Hiramatsu <mhiramat@...nel.org>,
linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>,
Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [v4] Documentation: bootconfig: Update boot configuration
documentation
On 3/4/20 10:09 AM, Markus Elfring wrote:
>>>> What about the following?
>>>>
>>>> User can group identical parent keys together and use braces to list child keys
>>
>> The user
> …
>>>> under them.
>>>
>>> Another wording alternative:
>>>
>>> The user can group settings together. Curly brackets enclose a configuration then
>>> according to a parent context.
>>
>> I slightly prefer Masami's text.
>
> Would you like to improve the distinction for grouping the involved items?
I'm hoping to be done with the current changes. :)
--
~Randy
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