linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v4] docs: admin-guide: Clarify sentences

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Message-ID: <20200420170358.7dafa798@lwn.net>
Date:   Mon, 20 Apr 2020 17:03:58 -0600
From:   Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
To:     Cristian Souza <cristianmsbr@...il.com>
Cc:     linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
        willy@...radead.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] docs: admin-guide: Clarify sentences

On Fri, 10 Apr 2020 22:02:01 -0300
Cristian Souza <cristianmsbr@...il.com> wrote:

> Changes to make the text more formal and organized. The reasons are now cited and described at the same time.
> Minor grammatical problems have also been fixed.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Cristian Souza <cristianmsbr@...il.com>
> ---
> Changes in v2:
>  - Text more formal and organized
> Changes in v3:
>  - Authors at the top of the file
>  - Removal of the source file in which the message is located
>  - All lines under 80 characters
> Changes in v4:
>  - Diff against mainline
> 
>  Documentation/admin-guide/init.rst | 76 ++++++++++++++----------------
>  1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

Applied, thanks.

jon