linux-kernel - [PATCH v2 6/8] Documentation: HID: hid-sensor editing & corrections

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Message-Id: <20201228205327.1063-7-rdunlap@infradead.org>
Date:   Mon, 28 Dec 2020 12:53:25 -0800
From:   Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
To:     linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Cc:     Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>,
        Jiri Kosina <jikos@...nel.org>,
        Benjamin Tissoires <benjamin.tissoires@...hat.com>,
        linux-input@...r.kernel.org, Jonathan Cameron <jic23@...nel.org>,
        Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@...ux.intel.com>,
        linux-iio@...r.kernel.org, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
        linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH v2 6/8] Documentation: HID: hid-sensor editing & corrections

Do basic editing & correction to hid-sensor.rst:
- use HID consistently instead of hid
- drop a duplicate word
- change article adjective an -> a
- fix grammar & punctuation
- spell out RW -> read-write
- hyphenate multi-word adjectives


Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
Cc: Jiri Kosina <jikos@...nel.org>
Cc: Jonathan Cameron <jic23@...nel.org>
Cc: Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@...ux.intel.com>
Cc: linux-input@...r.kernel.org
Cc: linux-iio@...r.kernel.org
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
Cc: linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
---
v2: rebase & resend

 Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst |   18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

--- linux-next-20201201.orig/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst
+++ linux-next-20201201/Documentation/hid/hid-sensor.rst
@@ -48,12 +48,12 @@ for different sensors. For example an ac
 an ambient light sensor can send illumination data.
 So the implementation has two parts:
 
-- Core hid driver
+- Core HID driver
 - Individual sensor processing part (sensor drivers)
 
 Core driver
 -----------
-The core driver registers (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses
+The core driver (hid-sensor-hub) registers as a HID driver. It parses
 report descriptors and identifies all the sensors present. It adds an MFD device
 with name HID-SENSOR-xxxx (where xxxx is usage id from the specification).
 
@@ -95,14 +95,14 @@ Registration functions::
 			u32 usage_id,
 			struct hid_sensor_hub_callbacks *usage_callback):
 
-Registers callbacks for an usage id. The callback functions are not allowed
+Registers callbacks for a usage id. The callback functions are not allowed
 to sleep::
 
 
   int sensor_hub_remove_callback(struct hid_sensor_hub_device *hsdev,
 			u32 usage_id):
 
-Removes callbacks for an usage id.
+Removes callbacks for a usage id.
 
 
 Parsing function::
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ This allows some differentiating use cas
 Some common use cases are debug other sensors or to provide some events like
 keyboard attached/detached or lid open/close.
 
-To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported uses sysfs
+To allow application to utilize these sensors, here they are exported using sysfs
 attribute groups, attributes and misc device interface.
 
 An example of this representation on sysfs::
@@ -207,9 +207,9 @@ An example of this representation on sys
   │   │   │   ├── input-1-200202-units
   │   │   │   ├── input-1-200202-value
 
-Here there is a custom sensors with four fields, two feature and two inputs.
+Here there is a custom sensor with four fields: two feature and two inputs.
 Each field is represented by a set of attributes. All fields except the "value"
-are read only. The value field is a RW field.
+are read only. The value field is a read-write field.
 
 Example::
 
@@ -237,6 +237,6 @@ These reports are pushed using misc devi
 	│   │   │   ├── 10:53 -> ../HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto
 	│   ├──  HID-SENSOR-2000e1.6.auto
 
-Each reports can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header
-consist of a 32 bit usage id, 64 bit time stamp and 32 bit length field of raw
+Each report can be of variable length preceded by a header. This header
+consists of a 32-bit usage id, 64-bit time stamp and 32-bit length field of raw
 data.