linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH 2/2] rtla: Minor fix to grammar in README.txt

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Message-ID: <6b8d24c-d793-866c-30a7-f015c7babd2d@redhat.com>
Date:   Fri, 8 Apr 2022 09:49:35 -0400 (EDT)
From:   John Kacur <jkacur@...hat.com>
To:     Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@...hat.com>
cc:     lkml <linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org>,
        RT <linux-rt-users@...r.kernel.org>,
        linux-trace-devel@...r.kernel.org,
        Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/2] rtla: Minor fix to grammar in README.txt



On Fri, 8 Apr 2022, Daniel Bristot de Oliveira wrote:

> On 4/2/22 06:39, John Kacur wrote:
> > "The rtla" doesn't make sense, change it to "The rtla tool"
> > This is better than removing the word "The" since some packaging tools
> > need the description to start with a capital letter.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: John Kacur <jkacur@...hat.com>
> > ---
> >  tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 2 +-
> >  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > index 6c88446f7e74..3b809eeff5f9 100644
> > --- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > +++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
> > @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
> >  RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
> >  
> > -The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> > +The rtla tool is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
> 
> I do not like bike-shedding but 'the rtla tool is a meta-tool" sounds repetitive.
> 
> Does:
> 
> The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands...
> 
> sound good for you?
> 
> -- Daniel
> 
> 

Perfect