linux-kernel - [PATCH 3/4] rtla: Minor grammar fix for rtla README

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Message-Id: <437f0accdde53713ab3cce46f3564be00487e031.1651247710.git.bristot@kernel.org>
Date:   Fri, 29 Apr 2022 18:28:12 +0200
From:   Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@...nel.org>
To:     Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>,
        linux-trace-devel@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Cc:     Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@...nel.org>,
        John Kacur <jkacur@...hat.com>
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] rtla: Minor grammar fix for rtla README

From: John Kacur <jkacur@...hat.com>

- Change to "The rtla meta-tool includes"
- Remove an unnecessary "But, "
- Adjust the formatting of the paragraph resulting from the changes.
- Simplify the wording for the libraries and tools.

Link: https://lore.kernel.org/r/20220408161012.10544-1-jkacur@redhat.com/

Cc: Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>
Cc: Daniel Bristot de Oliveria <bristot@...nel.org>
Fixes: 79ce8f43ac5a ("rtla: Real-Time Linux Analysis tool")
Acked-by: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@...nel.org>
Signed-off-by: John Kacur <jkacur@...hat.com>
Signed-off-by: Daniel Bristot de Oliveira <bristot@...nel.org>
---
 tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt | 12 +++++-------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
index 6c88446f7e74..0fbad2640b8c 100644
--- a/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
+++ b/tools/tracing/rtla/README.txt
@@ -1,15 +1,13 @@
 RTLA: Real-Time Linux Analysis tools
 
-The rtla is a meta-tool that includes a set of commands that
-aims to analyze the real-time properties of Linux. But, instead of
-testing Linux as a black box, rtla leverages kernel tracing
-capabilities to provide precise information about the properties
-and root causes of unexpected results.
+The rtla meta-tool includes a set of commands that aims to analyze
+the real-time properties of Linux. Instead of testing Linux as a black box,
+rtla leverages kernel tracing capabilities to provide precise information
+about the properties and root causes of unexpected results.
 
 Installing RTLA
 
-RTLA depends on some libraries and tools. More precisely, it depends on the
-following libraries:
+RTLA depends on the following libraries and tools:
 
  - libtracefs
  - libtraceevent
-- 
2.32.0