linux-kernel - [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording

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Date:   Mon,  8 Aug 2022 16:17:07 +0200
From:   luca.ceresoli@...tlin.com
To:     linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-i2c@...r.kernel.org
Cc:     Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@...tlin.com>,
        Wolfram Sang <wsa@...nel.org>, Peter Rosin <peda@...ntia.se>,
        linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording

From: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@...tlin.com>

Improve wording in a couple sentences.

Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@...tlin.com>
---
 Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst | 9 ++++-----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst b/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
index 6b68b95cd427..d816a23b80f2 100644
--- a/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
+++ b/Documentation/i2c/i2c-sysfs.rst
@@ -51,11 +51,10 @@ Google Pixel 3 phone for example::
 ``i2c-2`` is an I2C bus whose number is 2, and ``2-0049`` is an I2C device
 on bus 2 address 0x49 bound with a kernel driver.
 
-Terminologies
-=============
+Terminology
+===========
 
-First, let us define a couple of terminologies to avoid confusions in the later
-sections.
+First, let us define some terms to avoid confusions in the later sections.
 
 (Physical) I2C Bus Controller
 -----------------------------
@@ -117,7 +116,7 @@ Walk through Logical I2C Bus
 
 For the following content, we will use a more complex I2C topology as an
 example. Here is a brief graph for the I2C topology. If you do not understand
-this graph at the first glance, do not be afraid to continue reading this doc
+this graph at first glance, do not be afraid to continue reading this doc
 and review it when you finish reading.
 
 ::
-- 
2.34.1