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Message-ID: <YvVxE9jLNJZ0NWtd@shikoro>
Date:   Thu, 11 Aug 2022 23:13:55 +0200
From:   Wolfram Sang <wsa@...nel.org>
To:     luca.ceresoli@...tlin.com
Cc:     linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-i2c@...r.kernel.org,
        Peter Rosin <peda@...ntia.se>, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 8/9] docs: i2c: i2c-sysfs: improve wording


> -First, let us define a couple of terminologies to avoid confusions in the later
> -sections.
> +First, let us define some terms to avoid confusions in the later sections.

Does 'confusion' have a plural? I think singular is better here.

Rest looks good.


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