Date:   Mon, 22 Aug 2022 18:09:56 +0000
From:   Sadiya Kazi <sadiyakazi@...gle.com>
To:     brendanhiggins@...gle.com, davidgow@...gle.com,
        skhan@...uxfoundation.org, corbet@....net
Cc:     linux-kselftest@...r.kernel.org, kunit-dev@...glegroups.com,
        linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
        Sadiya Kazi <sadiyakazi@...gle.com>
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: KUnit: Reword kunit_tool guide

Updated the kunit_tool.rst guide to streamline it. The following changes
were made:
1. Updated headings
2. Reworded content across sections
3. Added a cross reference to full list of command-line args

Signed-off-by: Sadiya Kazi <sadiyakazi@...gle.com>
---
 Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/kunit-tool.rst | 82 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 42 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/kunit-tool.rst b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/kunit-tool.rst
index ae52e0f489f9..33186679f5de 100644
--- a/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/kunit-tool.rst
+++ b/Documentation/dev-tools/kunit/kunit-tool.rst
@@ -1,8 +1,10 @@
 .. SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0
 
-=================
-kunit_tool How-To
-=================
+========================
+Understanding kunit_tool
+========================
+
+This page introduces the kunit_tool and covers the concepts and working of this tool.
 
 What is kunit_tool?
 ===================
@@ -10,39 +12,37 @@ What is kunit_tool?
 kunit_tool is a script (``tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py``) that aids in building
 the Linux kernel as UML (`User Mode Linux
 <http://user-mode-linux.sourceforge.net/>`_), running KUnit tests, parsing
-the test results and displaying them in a user friendly manner.
+the test results and displaying them in a user-friendly manner.
 
 kunit_tool addresses the problem of being able to run tests without needing a
 virtual machine or actual hardware with User Mode Linux. User Mode Linux is a
 Linux architecture, like ARM or x86; however, unlike other architectures it
-compiles the kernel as a standalone Linux executable that can be run like any
+compiles the kernel as a standalone Linux executable. This executable can be run like any
 other program directly inside of a host operating system. To be clear, it does
 not require any virtualization support: it is just a regular program.
 
-What is a .kunitconfig?
-=======================
+What is .kunitconfig?
+=====================
 
-It's just a defconfig that kunit_tool looks for in the build directory
-(``.kunit`` by default).  kunit_tool uses it to generate a .config as you might
-expect. In addition, it verifies that the generated .config contains the CONFIG
-options in the .kunitconfig; the reason it does this is so that it is easy to
-be sure that a CONFIG that enables a test actually ends up in the .config.
+.kunitconfig is a default configuration file (defconfig) that kunit_tool looks
+for in the build directory (``.kunit``). The kunit_tool uses this file to
+generate a .config. Additionally, it also verifies that the generated .config contains the CONFIG options in the .kunitconfig file. This is done to make sure that a CONFIG that enables a test is  actually part of the .config file.
 
-It's also possible to pass a separate .kunitconfig fragment to kunit_tool,
+It is also possible to pass a separate .kunitconfig fragment to kunit_tool,
 which is useful if you have several different groups of tests you wish
-to run independently, or if you want to use pre-defined test configs for
+to run independently, or if you want to use pre-defined test configurations for
 certain subsystems.
 
-Getting Started with kunit_tool
+Getting started with kunit_tool
 ===============================
 
-If a kunitconfig is present at the root directory, all you have to do is:
+If a kunitconfig is present at the root directory, run the following command:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py run
 
-However, you most likely want to use it with the following options:
+However, most likely you may want to use it with the following options:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -68,20 +68,20 @@ For a list of all the flags supported by kunit_tool, you can run:
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py run --help
 
-Configuring, Building, and Running Tests
+Configuring, building, and running tests
 ========================================
 
-It's also possible to run just parts of the KUnit build process independently,
-which is useful if you want to make manual changes to part of the process.
+It is also possible to run specific parts of the KUnit build process independently.
+This is useful if you want to make manual changes to part of the process.
 
-A .config can be generated from a .kunitconfig by using the ``config`` argument
+If you want to generate a .config from a .kunitconfig, you can use the ``config`` argument
 when running kunit_tool:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py config
 
-Similarly, if you just want to build a KUnit kernel from the current .config,
+Similarly, if you want to build a KUnit kernel from the current .config,
 you can use the ``build`` argument:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
@@ -95,33 +95,31 @@ run the kernel and display the test results with the ``exec`` argument:
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py exec
 
-The ``run`` command which is discussed above is equivalent to running all three
+The ``run`` command, discussed above is equivalent to running all three
 of these in sequence.
 
 All of these commands accept a number of optional command-line arguments. The
 ``--help`` flag will give a complete list of these, or keep reading this page
 for a guide to some of the more useful ones.
 
-Parsing Test Results
+Parsing test results
 ====================
 
-KUnit tests output their results in TAP (Test Anything Protocol) format.
-kunit_tool will, when running tests, parse this output and print a summary
-which is much more pleasant to read. If you wish to look at the raw test
-results in TAP format, you can pass the ``--raw_output`` argument.
+The output of the KUnit test results are displayed in TAP (Test Anything Protocol) format.
+When running tests, the kunit_tool parses this output and prints a plaintext, human-readable summary. To view the raw test results in TAP format, you can use the ``--raw_output`` argument.
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py run --raw_output
 
 The raw output from test runs may contain other, non-KUnit kernel log
-lines. You can see just KUnit output with ``--raw_output=kunit``:
+lines. To view only the KUnit output, you can use ``--raw_output=kunit``:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
 	./tools/testing/kunit/kunit.py run --raw_output=kunit
 
-If you have KUnit results in their raw TAP format, you can parse them and print
+If you have KUnit results in the raw TAP format, you can parse them and print
 the human-readable summary with the ``parse`` command for kunit_tool. This
 accepts a filename for an argument, or will read from standard input.
 
@@ -135,11 +133,11 @@ accepts a filename for an argument, or will read from standard input.
 This is very useful if you wish to run tests in a configuration not supported
 by kunit_tool (such as on real hardware, or an unsupported architecture).
 
-Filtering Tests
+Filtering tests
 ===============
 
-It's possible to run only a subset of the tests built into a kernel by passing
-a filter to the ``exec`` or ``run`` commands. For example, if you only wanted
+It is possible to run only a subset of the tests built into a kernel by passing
+a filter to the ``exec`` or ``run`` commands. For example, if you want
 to run KUnit resource tests, you could use:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
@@ -148,15 +146,14 @@ to run KUnit resource tests, you could use:
 
 This uses the standard glob format for wildcards.
 
-Running Tests on QEMU
+Running tests on QEMU
 =====================
 
-kunit_tool supports running tests on QEMU as well as via UML (as mentioned
-elsewhere). The default way of running tests on QEMU requires two flags:
+kunit_tool supports running tests on QEMU as well as via UML. The default way of running tests on QEMU requires two flags:
 
 ``--arch``
 	Selects a collection of configs (Kconfig as well as QEMU configs
-	options, etc) that allow KUnit tests to be run on the specified
+	options and so on) that allow KUnit tests to be run on the specified
 	architecture in a minimal way; this is usually not much slower than
 	using UML. The architecture argument is the same as the name of the
 	option passed to the ``ARCH`` variable used by Kbuild. Not all
@@ -196,8 +193,8 @@ look something like this:
 		--jobs=12 \
 		--qemu_config=./tools/testing/kunit/qemu_configs/x86_64.py
 
-Other Useful Options
-====================
+Other useful options
+======================
 
 kunit_tool has a number of other command-line arguments which can be useful
 when adapting it to fit your environment or needs.
@@ -228,5 +225,10 @@ Some of the more useful ones are:
         dependencies by adding ``CONFIG_KUNIT_ALL_TESTS=1`` to your
         .kunitconfig is preferable.
 
-There are several other options (and new ones are often added), so do check
+There are several other options (and new ones are often added), so do run
 ``--help`` if you're looking for something not mentioned here.
+For more information on these options, see `Command-line-arguments
+<https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/dev-tools/kunit/run_wrapper.html#command-line-arguments>`__
+
+
+.
-- 
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