linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v10 0/6] Raspberry Pi Sense HAT driver

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Date:   Tue, 6 Sep 2022 09:21:11 +0700
From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To:     Charles Mirabile <cmirabil@...hat.com>
Cc:     linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
        Peter Robinson <pbrobinson@...il.com>,
        Serge Schneider <serge@...pberrypi.org>,
        Stefan Wahren <stefan.wahren@...e.com>,
        Nicolas Saenz Julienne <nicolassaenzj@...il.com>,
        Mattias Brugger <mbrugger@...e.com>,
        linux-rpi-kernel@...ts.infradead.org,
        linux-arm-kernel@...ts.infradead.org, rh-kdlp@...glegroups.com,
        Joel Slebodnick <jslebodn@...hat.com>,
        Joel Savitz <jsavitz@...hat.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v10 0/6] Raspberry Pi Sense HAT driver

On Tue, Aug 23, 2022 at 01:41:53PM -0400, Charles Mirabile wrote:
> This patch series adds a set of drivers for operating the Sense HAT
> peripheral device. This board is an add on for the Raspberry Pi that is
> designed to connect using the GPIO connector and communicate via I2C.
> 

Better say "Add a set of drivers for Sense HAT peripheral add-on device
for Raspberry Pi. The device is connected using GPIO connector and
communicate via I2C".

> This is a refactor of the work of Serge Schneider, the author of a
> version of this driver that is currently in the Raspberry Pi downstream
> kernel. We modified his code to make it suitable for upstream Linux.
> 

s/We modified his code/The driver code is modified/

Also, I see that description of individual patches is written in
descriptive mood. However, it is preferable to write in imperative
instead (see "Describe your changes" in
Documentation/process/submitting-patches.rst). The specific suggested
wordings are in reply to each patch.

Thanks.

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