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Message-ID: <20221102205110.GA2089605@roeck-us.net>
Date: Wed, 2 Nov 2022 13:51:10 -0700
From: Guenter Roeck <linux@...ck-us.net>
To: Quan Nguyen <quan@...amperecomputing.com>
Cc: Jean Delvare <jdelvare@...e.com>, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
Open Source Submission <patches@...erecomputing.com>,
Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>,
linux-hwmon@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
Phong Vo <phong@...amperecomputing.com>,
thang@...amperecomputing.com, openbmc@...ts.ozlabs.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] docs: hwmon: (smpro-hwmon) Improve grammar and formatting
On Wed, Nov 02, 2022 at 01:21:03PM +0700, Quan Nguyen wrote:
> Improve documentation grammar and formatting for the
> Ampere(R)'s Altra(R) SMpro hwmon driver.
>
> Thanks Bagas for the changes in the link below.
>
> Link: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y1aHiaZ1OpHZIzS9@google.com/T/#mfea2167b99384486a1b75d9304536015116c1821
> Signed-off-by: Quan Nguyen <quan@...amperecomputing.com>
> Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
Applied to hwmon-next.
Thanks,
Guenter
> ---
> Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst | 111 ++++++++++++++--------------
> 1 file changed, 56 insertions(+), 55 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> index 3a9b14dacf89..fb7b3665735b 100644
> --- a/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/hwmon/smpro-hwmon.rst
> @@ -7,39 +7,39 @@ Supported chips:
>
> * Ampere(R) Altra(R)
>
> - Prefix: 'smpro'
> + Prefix: ``smpro``
>
> - Reference: Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification
> + Reference: `Altra SoC BMC Interface Specification`
>
> Author: Thu Nguyen <thu@...amperecomputing.com>
>
> Description
> -----------
> -This driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R) SoC's based on the
> -SMpro co-processor (SMpro).
> -The following sensor types are supported by the driver:
> +The smpro-hwmon driver supports hardware monitoring for Ampere(R) Altra(R)
> +SoCs based on the SMpro co-processor (SMpro). The following sensor metrics
> +are supported by the driver:
>
> * temperature
> * voltage
> * current
> * power
>
> -The SMpro interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
> +The interface provides the registers to query the various sensors and
> their values which are then exported to userspace by this driver.
>
> Usage Notes
> -----------
>
> -SMpro hwmon driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
> +The driver creates at least two sysfs files for each sensor.
>
> -* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
> -* File ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
> +* ``<sensor_type><idx>_label`` reports the sensor label.
> +* ``<sensor_type><idx>_input`` returns the sensor value.
>
> -The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro root fs folder.
> -There is one root folder for each SMpro instance.
> +The sysfs files are allocated in the SMpro rootfs folder, with one root
> +directory for each instance.
>
> -When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers
> -and return -ENXIO.
> +When the SoC is turned off, the driver will fail to read registers and
> +return ``-ENXIO``.
>
> Sysfs entries
> -------------
> @@ -48,48 +48,49 @@ The following sysfs files are supported:
>
> * Ampere(R) Altra(R):
>
> -============ ============= ====== ===============================================
> -Name Unit Perm Description
> -temp1_input milli Celsius RO SoC temperature
> -temp2_input milli Celsius RO Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
> -temp2_crit milli Celsius RO SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
> -temp3_input milli Celsius RO Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
> -temp4_input milli Celsius RO Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
> -temp5_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
> -temp5_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp6_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
> -temp6_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp7_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
> -temp7_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp8_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
> -temp8_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp9_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
> -temp9_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp10_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
> -temp10_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp11_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
> -temp11_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp12_input milli Celsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
> -temp12_crit milli Celsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> -temp13_input milli Celsius RO Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
> -in0_input milli Volts RO Core voltage
> -in1_input milli Volts RO SoC voltage
> -in2_input milli Volts RO DIMM VRD1 voltage
> -in3_input milli Volts RO DIMM VRD2 voltage
> -in4_input milli Volts RO RCA VRD voltage
> -cur1_input milli Amperes RO Core VRD current
> -cur2_input milli Amperes RO SoC VRD current
> -cur3_input milli Amperes RO DIMM VRD1 current
> -cur4_input milli Amperes RO DIMM VRD2 current
> -cur5_input milli Amperes RO RCA VRD current
> -power1_input micro Watts RO Core VRD power
> -power2_input micro Watts RO SoC VRD power
> -power3_input micro Watts RO DIMM VRD1 power
> -power4_input micro Watts RO DIMM VRD2 power
> -power5_input micro Watts RO RCA VRD power
> -============ ============= ====== ===============================================
> -
> -Example::
> + ============ ============= ====== ===============================================
> + Name Unit Perm Description
> + ============ ============= ====== ===============================================
> + temp1_input millicelsius RO SoC temperature
> + temp2_input millicelsius RO Max temperature reported among SoC VRDs
> + temp2_crit millicelsius RO SoC VRD HOT Threshold temperature
> + temp3_input millicelsius RO Max temperature reported among DIMM VRDs
> + temp4_input millicelsius RO Max temperature reported among Core VRDs
> + temp5_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH0
> + temp5_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp6_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH1
> + temp6_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp7_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH2
> + temp7_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp8_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH3
> + temp8_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp9_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH4
> + temp9_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp10_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH5
> + temp10_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp11_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH6
> + temp11_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp12_input millicelsius RO Temperature of DIMM0 on CH7
> + temp12_crit millicelsius RO MEM HOT Threshold for all DIMMs
> + temp13_input millicelsius RO Max temperature reported among RCA VRDs
> + in0_input millivolts RO Core voltage
> + in1_input millivolts RO SoC voltage
> + in2_input millivolts RO DIMM VRD1 voltage
> + in3_input millivolts RO DIMM VRD2 voltage
> + in4_input millivolts RO RCA VRD voltage
> + cur1_input milliamperes RO Core VRD current
> + cur2_input milliamperes RO SoC VRD current
> + cur3_input milliamperes RO DIMM VRD1 current
> + cur4_input milliamperes RO DIMM VRD2 current
> + cur5_input milliamperes RO RCA VRD current
> + power1_input microwatts RO Core VRD power
> + power2_input microwatts RO SoC VRD power
> + power3_input microwatts RO DIMM VRD1 power
> + power4_input microwatts RO DIMM VRD2 power
> + power5_input microwatts RO RCA VRD power
> + ============ ============= ====== ===============================================
> +
> + Example::
>
> # cat in0_input
> 830
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