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Date:   Wed, 23 Nov 2022 20:54:42 +0700
From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To:     Zhen Lei <thunder.leizhen@...wei.com>
Cc:     "Paul E . McKenney" <paulmck@...nel.org>,
        Frederic Weisbecker <frederic@...nel.org>,
        Neeraj Upadhyay <quic_neeraju@...cinc.com>,
        Josh Triplett <josh@...htriplett.org>,
        Steven Rostedt <rostedt@...dmis.org>,
        Mathieu Desnoyers <mathieu.desnoyers@...icios.com>,
        Lai Jiangshan <jiangshanlai@...il.com>,
        Joel Fernandes <joel@...lfernandes.org>, rcu@...r.kernel.org,
        linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
        Stephen Rothwell <sfr@...b.auug.org.au>,
        linux-next@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] doc: Fix htmldocs build warnings of stallwarn.rst

On Wed, Nov 23, 2022 at 08:02:38PM +0800, Zhen Lei wrote:
> Documentation/RCU/stallwarn.rst:
> 401: WARNING: Literal block expected; none found.
> 428: WARNING: Literal block expected; none found.
> 445: WARNING: Literal block expected; none found.
> 459: WARNING: Literal block expected; none found.
> 468: WARNING: Literal block expected; none found.
> 
> The literal block need to be indented, so add two spaces to each line.

Indenting to match alignment of lists texts?

> Signed-off-by: Zhen Lei <thunder.leizhen@...wei.com>

You miss crediting linux-next list, so please add:

Link: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-next/20221123163255.48653674@canb.auug.org.au/
Fixes: 3d2788ba4573 ("doc: Document CONFIG_RCU_CPU_STALL_CPUTIME=y stall information")
Reported-by: Stephen Rothwell <sfr@...b.auug.org.au>

> -The sampling period is shown as follows:
> -:<------------first timeout---------->:<-----second timeout----->:
> -:<--half timeout-->:<--half timeout-->:                          :
> -:                  :<--first period-->:                          :
> -:                  :<-----------second sampling period---------->:
> -:                  :                  :                          :
> -:          snapshot time point    1st-stall                  2nd-stall
> +The sampling period is shown as follows::
>  
> +  |<------------first timeout---------->|<-----second timeout----->|
> +  |<--half timeout-->|<--half timeout-->|                          |
> +  |                  |<--first period-->|                          |
> +  |                  |<-----------second sampling period---------->|
> +  |                  |                  |                          |
> +  |          snapshot time point    1st-stall                  2nd-stall

The beginning pipe (|) on the last line of diagram above shouldn't be there
(axis label?).

>  
>  The following describes four typical scenarios:
>  
> -1. A CPU looping with interrupts disabled.::
> +1. A CPU looping with interrupts disabled.
>  
> -   rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> -   rcu:  number:        0          0            0
> -   rcu: cputime:        0          0            0   ==> 2500(ms)
> +   ::
> +
> +     rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> +     rcu:  number:        0          0            0
> +     rcu: cputime:        0          0            0   ==> 2500(ms)
>  
>     Because interrupts have been disabled throughout the measurement
>     interval, there are no interrupts and no context switches.
> @@ -440,11 +442,11 @@ The following describes four typical scenarios:
>  
>     This is similar to the previous example, but with non-zero number of
>     and CPU time consumed by hard interrupts, along with non-zero CPU
> -   time consumed by in-kernel execution.::
> +   time consumed by in-kernel execution. ::
>  
> -   rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> -   rcu:  number:      624          0            0
> -   rcu: cputime:       49          0         2446   ==> 2500(ms)
> +     rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> +     rcu:  number:      624          0            0
> +     rcu: cputime:       49          0         2446   ==> 2500(ms)
>  
>     The fact that there are zero softirqs gives a hint that these were
>     disabled, perhaps via local_bh_disable().  It is of course possible
> @@ -454,20 +456,22 @@ The following describes four typical scenarios:
>  
>  3. A CPU looping with preemption disabled.
>  
> -   Here, only the number of context switches is zero.::
> +   Here, only the number of context switches is zero. ::
>  
> -   rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> -   rcu:  number:      624         45            0
> -   rcu: cputime:       69          1         2425   ==> 2500(ms)
> +     rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> +     rcu:  number:      624         45            0
> +     rcu: cputime:       69          1         2425   ==> 2500(ms)
>  
>     This situation hints that the stalled CPU was looping with preemption
>     disabled.
>  
> -4. No looping, but massive hard and soft interrupts.::
> +4. No looping, but massive hard and soft interrupts.
> +
> +   ::
>  
> -   rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> -   rcu:  number:       xx         xx            0
> -   rcu: cputime:       xx         xx            0   ==> 2500(ms)
> +     rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
> +     rcu:  number:       xx         xx            0
> +     rcu: cputime:       xx         xx            0   ==> 2500(ms)
>  
>     Here, the number and CPU time of hard interrupts are all non-zero,
>     but the number of context switches and the in-kernel CPU time consumed
> 

Because paragraphs below the snippets directly refers to them,just use colon: 

---- >8 ----

diff --git a/Documentation/RCU/stallwarn.rst b/Documentation/RCU/stallwarn.rst
index f15b766d39b8d9..4f6b91be03cfe0 100644
--- a/Documentation/RCU/stallwarn.rst
+++ b/Documentation/RCU/stallwarn.rst
@@ -423,9 +423,7 @@ The sampling period is shown as follows::
 
 The following describes four typical scenarios:
 
-1. A CPU looping with interrupts disabled.
-
-   ::
+1. A CPU looping with interrupts disabled::
 
      rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
      rcu:  number:        0          0            0
@@ -442,7 +440,7 @@ The following describes four typical scenarios:
 
    This is similar to the previous example, but with non-zero number of
    and CPU time consumed by hard interrupts, along with non-zero CPU
-   time consumed by in-kernel execution. ::
+   time consumed by in-kernel execution::
 
      rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
      rcu:  number:      624          0            0
@@ -456,7 +454,7 @@ The following describes four typical scenarios:
 
 3. A CPU looping with preemption disabled.
 
-   Here, only the number of context switches is zero. ::
+   Here, only the number of context switches is zero::
 
      rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
      rcu:  number:      624         45            0
@@ -465,9 +463,7 @@ The following describes four typical scenarios:
    This situation hints that the stalled CPU was looping with preemption
    disabled.
 
-4. No looping, but massive hard and soft interrupts.
-
-   ::
+4. No looping, but massive hard and soft interrupts::
 
      rcu:          hardirqs   softirqs   csw/system
      rcu:  number:       xx         xx            0

Thanks.

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