linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst

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Message-ID: <Y4V5lDHNqYHEzEaI@debian.me>
Date:   Tue, 29 Nov 2022 10:16:36 +0700
From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To:     Qais Yousef <qyousef@...alina.io>
Cc:     Ingo Molnar <mingo@...nel.org>,
        Peter Zijlstra <peterz@...radead.org>,
        Vincent Guittot <vincent.guittot@...aro.org>,
        Dietmar Eggemann <dietmar.eggemann@....com>,
        Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
        linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Lukasz Luba <lukasz.luba@....com>,
        Xuewen Yan <xuewen.yan94@...il.com>, Wei Wang <wvw@...gle.com>,
        Jonathan JMChen <Jonathan.JMChen@...iatek.com>,
        Hank <han.lin@...iatek.com>, Paul Bone <pbone@...illa.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: sched: Add a new sched-util-clamp.rst

On Sun, Nov 27, 2022 at 02:26:57PM +0000, Qais Yousef wrote:
> The new util clamp feature needs a document explaining what it is and
> how to use it. The new document hopefully covers everything one needs to
> know about uclamp.
> 

For patch subject, better say "Documentation: sched: Document util clamp
feature".

> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef <qais.yousef@....com>
> Signed-off-by: Qais Yousef (Google) <qyousef@...alina.io>
> ---
> 
> Changes in v2:
> 
> 	* Address various style comments from Bagas
> 

I don't see any of my wording suggestions from [1] being applied. Still
a rather confused to read (maybe should be applied on top of jon's
suggestions)?

[1]: https://lore.kernel.org/lkml/Y3II59dyKuvQGIhG@debian.me/
[2]: https://lore.kernel.org/linux-doc/87cz976pwn.fsf@meer.lwn.net/

Thanks.

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