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Date:   Thu, 12 Jan 2023 09:30:47 -0800
From:   Reinette Chatre <reinette.chatre@...el.com>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v11 13/13] Documentation/x86: Update resctrl.rst for new
 features

Hi Babu,

On 1/11/2023 4:47 PM, Moger, Babu wrote:
 
> diff --git a/Documentation/x86/resctrl.rst b/Documentation/x86/resctrl.rst
> index 2860856f4463..7df5889237f4 100644
> --- a/Documentation/x86/resctrl.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/x86/resctrl.rst
> @@ -24,10 +24,15 @@ CDP (Code and Data Prioritization)          "cdp_l3", "cdp_l2"
>  CQM (Cache QoS Monitoring)                     "cqm_llc", "cqm_occup_llc"
>  MBM (Memory Bandwidth Monitoring)              "cqm_mbm_total", "cqm_mbm_local"
>  MBA (Memory Bandwidth Allocation)              "mba"
> -SMBA (Slow Memory Bandwidth Allocation)         "smba"
> -BMEC (Bandwidth Monitoring Event Configuration) "bmec"
> +SMBA (Slow Memory Bandwidth Allocation)         ""
> +BMEC (Bandwidth Monitoring Event Configuration) ""
>  ===============================================        ================================
> 
> +Historically, new features were made visible by default in /proc/cpuinfo. This
> +resulted in the feature flags becoming hard to parse by the humans. Adding a new
> +flag to /proc/cpuinfo should be avoided if user space can obtain information
> +about the feature from resctrl's info directory.
> +

Could you please replace "parse by the humans" with "parse by humans"?

The rest looks good to me.

Could you please do a sanity check by building the documentation to ensure
that the usage of the empty quotes looks as expected and is not parsed out by a
tool when, for example, creating the html docs?

>  To use the feature mount the file system::
> 
>   # mount -t resctrl resctrl [-o cdp[,cdpl2][,mba_MBps]] /sys/fs/resctrl

Thank you very much

Reinette

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