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Message-ID: <d532dc0c-4a5d-986e-19d4-1c90071d2cdb@linuxfoundation.org>
Date: Mon, 30 Jan 2023 16:19:48 -0700
From: Shuah Khan <skhan@...uxfoundation.org>
To: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>, corbet@....net
Cc: sshefali021@...il.com, kstewart@...uxfoundation.org,
linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
Shuah Khan <skhan@...uxfoundation.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs: add workload-tracing document to admin-guide
On 1/27/23 20:14, Bagas Sanjaya wrote:
> On Fri, Jan 27, 2023 at 04:46:16PM -0700, Shuah Khan wrote:
>> +strace tool can be used to trace system calls made by a process and signals
>> +it receives. a process to the perf, stress-ng, paxtest workloads. System
>
> "... to trace system calls made by a process (which can be perf, stress-ng,
> paxtest workloads, or neither)."
>
>> +Before we can get started we will have to get our system ready. We assume
>
> "Before we can get started the system must be prepared first."
>
>> +Browsing kernel sources ::
>
> "To browse kernel sources, you will need:"
>
>> +Workload overview
>> +=================
>> +
>> +We used strace to trace perf bench, stress-ng and paxtest workloads to
>
> "In this section, we use strace to trace ..."
>
Thank you for the review. I will address them in v3.
thanks,
-- Shuah
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