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Date: Sun, 12 Feb 2023 16:47:42 +0200
From: Mike Rapoport <rppt@...nel.org>
To: Matthew Wilcox <willy@...radead.org>
Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
Andrew Morton <akpm@...ux-foundation.org>,
Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>,
David Hildenbrand <david@...hat.com>,
Johannes Weiner <hannes@...xchg.org>,
Lorenzo Stoakes <lstoakes@...il.com>,
Mel Gorman <mgorman@...e.de>, Michal Hocko <mhocko@...nel.org>,
Vlastimil Babka <vbabka@...e.cz>, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] docs/mm: Physical Memory: add example of interleaving
nodes
On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 11:50:08AM +0000, Matthew Wilcox wrote:
> On Sun, Feb 12, 2023 at 11:54:45AM +0200, Mike Rapoport wrote:
> > +Note, that memory banks may belong to interleaving nodes. In the example
> > +below an x86 machine has 16Gbytes or RAM in 4 memory banks, even banks
> > +belong to node 0 and odd banks belong to node 1::
>
> s/or RAM/of RAM/
Thanks
> The "Note," is superfluous, you can just write:
>
> Memory banks may belong to interleaved nodes.
Ok
> And I think we prefer the newer form "GiB" for new documentation.
I've used Gbytes in previous examples, so I'd prefer to keep it consistent
We can swipe s/Gbytes/GiB/g later.
> > +
> > + 0 4G 8G 12G 16G
> > + +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > + | node 0 | | node 1 | | node 0 | | node 1 |
> > + +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +
> > + 0 16M 4G
> > + +-----+-------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > + | DMA | DMA32 | | NORMAL | | NORMAL | | NORMAL |
> > + +-----+-------+ +-------------+ +-------------+ +-------------+
> > +
> > +In such case node 0 will span from 0 to 12 Gbytes and node 1 will span from
> > +4 to 16 Gbytes.
>
> s/such/this/ (and I'd use GiB again)
--
Sincerely yours,
Mike.
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