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Message-ID: <f3e29e72-240a-20ba-c301-5b6fe1ec777a@gmail.com>
Date:   Sat, 1 Apr 2023 09:10:29 +0700
From:   Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To:     Kim Phillips <kim.phillips@....com>,
        Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
        Mike Rapoport <rppt@...nel.org>, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
Cc:     kernel-janitors@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] docs/mm: Physical Memory: Fix grammar

On 3/31/23 23:52, Kim Phillips wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/mm/physical_memory.rst b/Documentation/mm/physical_memory.rst
> index 1bc888d36ea1..df2ed81e3639 100644
> --- a/Documentation/mm/physical_memory.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/mm/physical_memory.rst
> @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ a bank of memory very suitable for DMA near peripheral devices.
>  
>  Each bank is called a node and the concept is represented under Linux by a
>  ``struct pglist_data`` even if the architecture is UMA. This structure is
> -always referenced to by it's typedef ``pg_data_t``. ``A pg_data_t`` structure
> +always referenced by its typedef ``pg_data_t``. A ``pg_data_t`` structure
>  for a particular node can be referenced by ``NODE_DATA(nid)`` macro where
>  ``nid`` is the ID of that node.
>  

LGTM, thanks!

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>

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