linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v5 37/37] memprofiling: Documentation

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Date: Thu, 7 Mar 2024 12:53:06 -0800
From: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
To: John Hubbard <jhubbard@...dia.com>,
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Subject: Re: [PATCH v5 37/37] memprofiling: Documentation



On 3/7/24 12:15, John Hubbard wrote:
> On 3/7/24 12:03, Randy Dunlap wrote:
>> On 3/7/24 10:17, Kent Overstreet wrote:
>>> On Wed, Mar 06, 2024 at 07:18:57PM -0800, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> ...
>>>>> +- i.e. iterating over them to print them in debugfs/procfs.
>>>>
>>>>    i.e., iterating
>>>
>>> i.e. latin id est, that is: grammatically my version is fine
>>>
>>
>> Some of my web search hits say that a comma is required after "i.e.".
>> At least one of them says that it is optional.
>> And one says that it is not required in British English.
>>
>> But writing it with "that is":
>>
>>
>> hence code tagging) and then finding and operating on them at runtime
>> - that is iterating over them to print them in debugfs/procfs.
>>
>> is not good IMO. But it's your document.
>>
> 
> Technical writing often benefits from a small amount redundancy. Short
> sentences and repetition of terms are helpful to most readers. And this
> also stays out of the more advanced grammatical constructs, as a side
> effect.
> 
> So, for example, something *approximately* like this, see what you
> think:
> 
> Memory allocation profiling is based upon code tagging. Code tagging is
> a library for declaring static structs (typically by associating a file
> and line number with a descriptive string), and then finding and
> operating on those structs at runtime. Memory allocation profiling's
> runtime operation is simply: print the structs via debugfs/procfs.

Works for me.  Thanks.

-- 
#Randy