linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] Refactor phrasing for clarity

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Date: Mon, 13 May 2024 16:09:46 +0700
From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To: Luis Felipe Hernandez <luis.hernandez093@...il.com>,
	Shuah Khan <skhan@...uxfoundation.org>, corbet@....net
Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@...ts.linuxfoundation.org,
	Linux Documentation <linux-doc@...r.kernel.org>,
	Linux Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org>,
	Mao Zhu <zhumao001@...suo.com>, Ran Sun <sunran001@...suo.com>,
	Xiang wangx <wangxiang@...rlc.com>,
	Shaomin Deng <dengshaomin@...rlc.com>,
	Charles Han <hanchunchao@...pur.com>,
	Attreyee M <tintinm2017@...il.com>, LihaSika <lihasika@...il.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Refactor phrasing for clarity

On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 02:24:02AM +0000, Luis Felipe Hernandez wrote:
> * Updated title capitalization for consistency
> * Fixed acronym capitalization (e.g. CPU, vCPU)
> * Added usage of hypenated compoud adjective
> (e.g. host-side polling, where host-side is modifying polling)
> * Added missing verb "as" in "basic logic is as follows"
> * Added missing articl "an" in "guest_halt_poll_ns when an event occurs"
> * Fixed parameter definition in 4, all previous examples started with
>   descibing the parameter in the first sentence followed by additional
> notes
> * Replaced C-terminology Bool in favor of formal form Boolean
> * Cleaned up phrasing in "Further Notes" section for clarity
> 

LGTM, thanks!

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>

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