linux-kernel - [PATCH v4] docs: Fix grammar and phrasing errors in reporting-issues.rst

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Message-Id: <20240816104902.123452-1-surajsonawane0215@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 16:19:02 +0530
From: SurajSonawane2415 <surajsonawane0215@...il.com>
To: linux@...mhuis.info
Cc: corbet@....net,
	linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
	SurajSonawane2415 <surajsonawane0215@...il.com>
Subject: [PATCH v4] docs: Fix grammar and phrasing errors in reporting-issues.rst

Fix grammatical errors and improve phrasing in the `reporting-issues.rst`
documentation file. These changes enhance readability and ensure the
accuracy of the instructions provided.

Signed-off-by: SurajSonawane2415 <surajsonawane0215@...il.com>
---
V3 -> V4: Adjust line wrapping to split the long line properly.
V2 -> V3: Re-added the fix for the line: "That's why you might be need to uninstall the".
V1 -> V2: Removed the unwanted change to the line: "try search terms like".

 Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst
index 2fd5a030235a..d0e645fc845a 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/reporting-issues.rst
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ developers. It might be all that's needed for people already familiar with
 reporting issues to Free/Libre & Open Source Software (FLOSS) projects. For
 everyone else there is this section. It is more detailed and uses a
 step-by-step approach. It still tries to be brief for readability and leaves
-out a lot of details; those are described below the step-by-step guide in a
+out a lot of details; those are described below in the step-by-step guide in a
 reference section, which explains each of the steps in more detail. 

 Note: this section covers a few more aspects than the TL;DR and does things in
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ face, even if they look small or totally unrelated. That's why you should report
 issues with these kernels to the vendor. Its developers should look into the
 report and, in case it turns out to be an upstream issue, fix it directly
 upstream or forward the report there. In practice that often does not work out
-or might not what you want. You thus might want to consider circumventing the
+or might not be what you want. You thus might want to consider circumventing the
 vendor by installing the very latest Linux kernel core yourself. If that's an
 option for you move ahead in this process, as a later step in this guide will
 explain how to do that once it rules out other potential causes for your issue.
@@ -472,8 +472,8 @@ before proceeding.
 Note, you might not be aware that your system is using one of these solutions:
 they often get set up silently when you install Nvidia's proprietary graphics
 driver, VirtualBox, or other software that requires a some support from a
-module not part of the Linux kernel. That why your might need to uninstall the
-packages with such software to get rid of any 3rd party kernel module.
+module not part of the Linux kernel. That's why you might need to uninstall
+the packages with such software to get rid of any 3rd party kernel module.
 
 
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