linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v3] Docs/zh_CN: Translate page

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Message-ID: <68116566-c075-4f29-9809-8d93b69a933e@linux.dev>
Date: Sat, 5 Oct 2024 16:49:56 +0800
From: Zenghui Yu <zenghui.yu@...ux.dev>
To: Pengyu Zhang <zpenya1314@...il.com>
Cc: alexs@...nel.org, siyanteng@...ngson.cn, corbet@....net,
 seakeel@...il.com, si.yanteng@...ux.dev, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
 linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, yaxin_wang_uestc@....com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v3] Docs/zh_CN: Translate page_tables.rst to Simplified
 Chinese

On 2024/9/19 21:38, Pengyu Zhang wrote:
> This patch provides a Simplified Chinese translation of the
> "page_tables.rst" document, aimed at improving accessibility
> for Chinese-speaking developers and users.
> 
> The translation prioritizes technical accuracy and readability,
> ensuring that the content remains clear and informative for
> its intended audience.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Pengyu Zhang <zpenya1314@...il.com>

Overall the translation looks good, thanks for your effort! Only two
nits inline...

> +在页粒度为 4KB 且地址范围为32位的情况下，pfn 0 对应地址0x00000000，pfn 1 对应
> +地址0x00001000，pfn 2 对应地址 0x00002000，以此类推，直到 pfn 0xfffff 对应
> +0xfffff000。如果页粒度为 16KB，则 pfn 分别对应地址 0x00004000、0x00008000
> +... 0xffffc000，pfn 的范围从 0 到 0x3fffff。

s/0x3fffff/0x3ffff/

Mind fixing it in the original doc?

> +本文将简化并概述 Linux 内核如何处理这些页面错误、创建表和表项、检查内存是否存在，
> +以及当内存不存在时，如何请求从持久存储或其他设备加载数据，并更新 MMU 及其缓存。
> +
> +前几步取决于设备依赖。大多是架构跳转到 `do_page_fault()`，而 x86 中断处理程序由
             ^^^^^^^^
I'm afraid this is not a correct translation for "architecture
dependent".