linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH 4/4] docs: Fix typos, improve grammar in Userspace API

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Message-Id: <288253c0-c194-47e0-be54-f17dc1695a1a@app.fastmail.com>
Date: Sun, 18 May 2025 21:49:22 -0400
From: "Mark Pearson" <mpearson-lenovo@...ebb.ca>
To: Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää <hannelotta@...il.com>,
 mchehab@...nel.org, ribalda@...omium.org, hverkuil@...all.nl,
 hljunggr@...co.com, dave.jiang@...el.com, jgg@...pe.ca, saeedm@...dia.com,
 Jonathan.Cameron@...wei.com, "Jonathan Corbet" <corbet@....net>,
 Ilpo Järvinen <ilpo.jarvinen@...ux.intel.com>,
 "Limonciello, Mario" <mario.limonciello@....com>,
 "Armin Wolf" <W_Armin@....de>
Cc: linux-media@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
 linux-kernel-mentees@...ts.linux.dev
Subject: Re: [PATCH 4/4] docs: Fix typos, improve grammar in Userspace API

Hi

On Sat, May 17, 2025, at 9:27 AM, Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää wrote:
> Fix a typo and improve wording and punctuation in
> the documentation for Userspace API.
>
> Signed-off-by: Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää <hannelotta@...il.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/userspace-api/sysfs-platform_profile.rst | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/sysfs-platform_profile.rst 
> b/Documentation/userspace-api/sysfs-platform_profile.rst
> index 7f013356118a..6613e188242a 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/sysfs-platform_profile.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/sysfs-platform_profile.rst
> @@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ API for selecting the platform profile of these 
> automatic mechanisms.
>  Note that this API is only for selecting the platform profile, it is
>  NOT a goal of this API to allow monitoring the resulting performance
>  characteristics. Monitoring performance is best done with device/vendor
> -specific tools such as e.g. turbostat.
> +specific tools, e.g. turbostat.
> 
> -Specifically when selecting a high performance profile the actual achieved
> +Specifically, when selecting a high performance profile the actual achieved
>  performance may be limited by various factors such as: the heat generated
>  by other components, room temperature, free air flow at the bottom of a
>  laptop, etc. It is explicitly NOT a goal of this API to let userspace know
> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ added. Drivers which wish to introduce new profile names must:
>  "Custom" profile support
>  ========================
>  The platform_profile class also supports profiles advertising a "custom"
> -profile. This is intended to be set by drivers when the setttings in the
> +profile. This is intended to be set by drivers when the settings in the
>  driver have been modified in a way that a standard profile doesn't represent
>  the current state.
> 
> -- 
> 2.39.5

Looks good. Thanks.
Mark

Reviewed-by: Mark Pearson <mpearson-lenovo@...ebb.ca>