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Message-ID: <aDAPtpE-5mkZ6P9y@archie.me>
Date: Fri, 23 May 2025 13:03:34 +0700
From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>
To: Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää <hannelotta@...il.com>,
	mchehab@...nel.org, ribalda@...omium.org, hverkuil@...all.nl,
	sebastian.fricke@...labora.com, hljunggr@...co.com,
	dave.jiang@...el.com, jgg@...pe.ca, saeedm@...dia.com,
	Jonathan.Cameron@...wei.com, corbet@....net,
	ilpo.jarvinen@...ux.intel.com, mario.limonciello@....com,
	W_Armin@....de, mpearson-lenovo@...ebb.ca,
	skhan@...uxfoundation.org
Cc: linux-media@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel-mentees@...ts.linux.dev
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2 2/4] docs: Improve grammar, formatting in Video4Linux

On Thu, May 22, 2025 at 02:52:53PM +0300, Hanne-Lotta Mäenpää wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/biblio.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/biblio.rst
> index 35674eeae20d..856acf6a890c 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/biblio.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/biblio.rst
> @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ ITU-T.81
>  ========
>  
>  
> -:title:     ITU-T Recommendation T.81 "Information Technology --- Digital Compression and Coding of Continous-Tone Still Images --- Requirements and Guidelines"
> +:title:     ITU-T Recommendation T.81 "Information Technology --- Digital Compression and Coding of Continuous-Tone Still Images --- Requirements and Guidelines"
>  
>  :author:    International Telecommunication Union (http://www.itu.int)
>  
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/dev-sliced-vbi.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/dev-sliced-vbi.rst
> index 42cdb0a9f786..96e0e85a822c 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/dev-sliced-vbi.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/dev-sliced-vbi.rst
> @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ capabilities, and they may support :ref:`control` ioctls.
>  The :ref:`video standard <standard>` ioctls provide information vital
>  to program a sliced VBI device, therefore must be supported.
>  
> -.. _sliced-vbi-format-negotitation:
> +.. _sliced-vbi-format-negotiation:
>  
>  Sliced VBI Format Negotiation
>  =============================
> @@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ Sliced VBI Data in MPEG Streams
>  
>  If a device can produce an MPEG output stream, it may be capable of
>  providing
> -:ref:`negotiated sliced VBI services <sliced-vbi-format-negotitation>`
> +:ref:`negotiated sliced VBI services <sliced-vbi-format-negotiation>`
>  as data embedded in the MPEG stream. Users or applications control this
>  sliced VBI data insertion with the
>  :ref:`V4L2_CID_MPEG_STREAM_VBI_FMT <v4l2-mpeg-stream-vbi-fmt>`
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-rx.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-rx.rst
> index b6cfc0e823d2..ccd439e9e0e3 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-rx.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-rx.rst
> @@ -64,17 +64,12 @@ FM_RX Control IDs
>      broadcasts speech. If the transmitter doesn't make this distinction,
>      then it will be set.
>  
> -``V4L2_CID_TUNE_DEEMPHASIS``
> -    (enum)
> -
> -enum v4l2_deemphasis -
> +``V4L2_CID_TUNE_DEEMPHASIS (enum)``
>      Configures the de-emphasis value for reception. A de-emphasis filter
>      is applied to the broadcast to accentuate the high audio
>      frequencies. Depending on the region, a time constant of either 50
> -    or 75 useconds is used. The enum v4l2_deemphasis defines possible
> -    values for de-emphasis. Here they are:
> -
> -
> +    or 75 microseconds is used. The enum v4l2_deemphasis defines possible
> +    values for de-emphasis. They are:
>  
>  .. flat-table::
>      :header-rows:  0
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-tx.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-tx.rst
> index 04c997c9a4c3..cb40cf4cc3ec 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-tx.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/ext-ctrls-fm-tx.rst
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ FM_TX Control IDs
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_AUDIO_LIMITER_RELEASE_TIME (integer)``
>      Sets the audio deviation limiter feature release time. Unit is in
> -    useconds. Step and range are driver-specific.
> +    microseconds. Step and range are driver-specific.
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_AUDIO_LIMITER_DEVIATION (integer)``
>      Configures audio frequency deviation level in Hz. The range and step
> @@ -121,16 +121,16 @@ FM_TX Control IDs
>      range and step are driver-specific.
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_AUDIO_COMPRESSION_THRESHOLD (integer)``
> -    Sets the threshold level for audio compression freature. It is a dB
> +    Sets the threshold level for audio compression feature. It is a dB
>      value. The range and step are driver-specific.
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_AUDIO_COMPRESSION_ATTACK_TIME (integer)``
> -    Sets the attack time for audio compression feature. It is a useconds
> +    Sets the attack time for audio compression feature. It is a microseconds
>      value. The range and step are driver-specific.
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_AUDIO_COMPRESSION_RELEASE_TIME (integer)``
>      Sets the release time for audio compression feature. It is a
> -    useconds value. The range and step are driver-specific.
> +    microseconds value. The range and step are driver-specific.
>  
>  ``V4L2_CID_PILOT_TONE_ENABLED (boolean)``
>      Enables or disables the pilot tone generation feature.
> @@ -143,17 +143,12 @@ FM_TX Control IDs
>      Configures pilot tone frequency value. Unit is in Hz. The range and
>      step are driver-specific.
>  
> -``V4L2_CID_TUNE_PREEMPHASIS``
> -    (enum)
> -
> -enum v4l2_preemphasis -
> +``V4L2_CID_TUNE_PREEMPHASIS (enum)``
>      Configures the pre-emphasis value for broadcasting. A pre-emphasis
>      filter is applied to the broadcast to accentuate the high audio
>      frequencies. Depending on the region, a time constant of either 50
> -    or 75 useconds is used. The enum v4l2_preemphasis defines possible
> -    values for pre-emphasis. Here they are:
> -
> -
> +    or 75 microseconds is used. The enum v4l2_preemphasis defines possible
> +    values for pre-emphasis. They are:
>  
>  .. flat-table::
>      :header-rows:  0
> @@ -166,8 +161,6 @@ enum v4l2_preemphasis -
>      * - ``V4L2_PREEMPHASIS_75_uS``
>        - A pre-emphasis of 75 uS is used.
>  
> -
> -
>  ``V4L2_CID_TUNE_POWER_LEVEL (integer)``
>      Sets the output power level for signal transmission. Unit is in
>      dBuV. Range and step are driver-specific.
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb12p.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb12p.rst
> index 7c3810ff783c..8c03aedcc00e 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb12p.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb12p.rst
> @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
>  .. _v4l2-pix-fmt-sgrbg12p:
>  
>  *******************************************************************************************************************************
> -V4L2_PIX_FMT_SRGGB12P ('pRCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SGRBG12P ('pgCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SGBRG12P ('pGCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SBGGR12P ('pBCC'),
> +V4L2_PIX_FMT_SRGGB12P ('pRCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SGRBG12P ('pgCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SGBRG12P ('pGCC'), V4L2_PIX_FMT_SBGGR12P ('pBCC')
>  *******************************************************************************************************************************
>  
>  
> @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Description
>  These four pixel formats are packed raw sRGB / Bayer formats with 12
>  bits per colour. Every two consecutive samples are packed into three
>  bytes. Each of the first two bytes contain the 8 high order bits of
> -the pixels, and the third byte contains the four least significants
> +the pixels, and the third byte contains the four least significant
>  bits of each pixel, in the same order.
>  
>  Each n-pixel row contains n/2 green samples and n/2 blue or red
> diff --git a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb14p.rst b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb14p.rst
> index 3572e42adb22..f4f53d7dbdeb 100644
> --- a/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb14p.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/userspace-api/media/v4l/pixfmt-srggb14p.rst
> @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ These four pixel formats are packed raw sRGB / Bayer formats with 14
>  bits per colour. Every four consecutive samples are packed into seven
>  bytes. Each of the first four bytes contain the eight high order bits
>  of the pixels, and the three following bytes contains the six least
> -significants bits of each pixel, in the same order.
> +significant bits of each pixel, in the same order.
>  
>  Each n-pixel row contains n/2 green samples and n/2 blue or red samples,
>  with alternating green-red and green-blue rows. They are conventionally

LGTM, thanks!

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>

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