linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] Documentation: cxl: fix typos and improve clarity in memory-devices.rst

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Message-ID: <aDzipGmldaeje43H@gourry-fedora-PF4VCD3F>
Date: Sun, 1 Jun 2025 19:30:44 -0400
From: Gregory Price <gourry@...rry.net>
To: Alok Tiwari <alok.a.tiwari@...cle.com>
Cc: dave@...olabs.net, jonathan.cameron@...wei.com, dave.jiang@...el.com,
	alison.schofield@...el.com, vishal.l.verma@...el.com,
	ira.weiny@...el.com, dan.j.williams@...el.com, corbet@....net,
	linux-cxl@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, darren.kenny@...cle.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: cxl: fix typos and improve clarity in
 memory-devices.rst

On Sat, May 31, 2025 at 12:51:58AM -0700, Alok Tiwari wrote:
> This patch corrects several typographical issues and improves phrasing
> in memory-devices.rst:
> 
> - Fixes duplicate word ("1 one") and adjusts phrasing for clarity.
> - Adds missing hyphen in "on-device".
> - Corrects "a give memory device" to "a given memory device".
> - fix singular/plural "decoder resource" -> "decoder resources".
> - Clarifies "spans to Host Bridges" -> "spans two Host Bridges".
> 
> These changes improve readability and accuracy of the documentation.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Alok Tiwari <alok.a.tiwari@...cle.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst | 12 ++++++------
>  1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst b/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> index d732c42526df..e9e2952a967d 100644
> --- a/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/driver-api/cxl/memory-devices.rst
> @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ Platform firmware enumerates a menu of interleave options at the "CXL root port"
>  (Linux term for the top of the CXL decode topology). From there, PCIe topology
>  dictates which endpoints can participate in which Host Bridge decode regimes.
>  Each PCIe Switch in the path between the root and an endpoint introduces a point
> -at which the interleave can be split. For example platform firmware may say at a
> -given range only decodes to 1 one Host Bridge, but that Host Bridge may in turn
> +at which the interleave can be split. For example, platform firmware may say at a
                                                                                ^^^^
If you wouldn't mind, can you also change:                           "at a"  - >  "a"

Otherwise

Reviewed-by: Gregory Price <gourry@...rry.net>