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Date: Sat, 3 Jan 2026 15:24:52 +0100
From: Miguel Ojeda <miguel.ojeda.sandonis@...il.com>
To: Filipe Xavier <felipeaggger@...il.com>
Cc: Miguel Ojeda <ojeda@...nel.org>, Alex Gaynor <alex.gaynor@...il.com>,
Boqun Feng <boqun.feng@...il.com>, Gary Guo <gary@...yguo.net>,
Björn Roy Baron <bjorn3_gh@...tonmail.com>,
Benno Lossin <benno.lossin@...ton.me>, Andreas Hindborg <a.hindborg@...nel.org>,
Alice Ryhl <aliceryhl@...gle.com>, Trevor Gross <tmgross@...ch.edu>,
Danilo Krummrich <dakr@...nel.org>, daniel.almeida@...labora.com,
rust-for-linux@...r.kernel.org, felipe_life@...e.com,
linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Lyude Paul <lyude@...hat.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH v7] rust: add new macro for common bitmap operations
On Thu, Jan 1, 2026 at 7:21 PM Filipe Xavier <felipeaggger@...il.com> wrote:
>
> +// SPDX-License-Identifier: GPL-2.0
> +
> +/// Common helper for declaring bitflag and bitmask types.
Please add a `//!` doc comment between these, even if it is a trivial
single line one, that describes what the module is about -- we have
them in modules even if they are `doc(hidden)` ones.
> +/// This macro handles:
I am not a native speaker, but "handles" can be confused for input.
The documentation also mixes a bit input and output, so it isn't clear
what it does.
I would instead try to explain what the inputs are and what the macro
implements in return, e.g.
/// This macro takes as input:
/// - A struct representing ...
/// - An enumeration representing ...
///
/// And generates:
/// - ...
Or something like that. The example is currently doing most of the
work at the moment.
> +/// - A struct representing a bitmask, and an enumerator representing bitflags which
enumeration?
> +/// may be used in the aforementioned bitmask.
Missing spaces at the beginning to match indentation.
> +/// - Implementations of common bitmap op. ([`::core::ops::BitOr`], [`::core::ops::BitAnd`], etc.).
Why is "bitmap" used here (and in the commit title)? This is intended
only for single-word bitflags, no?
Also, "operators" (please avoid contractions in docs).
> +/// Defining and using impl_flags:
Intra-doc link?
> +/// pub struct Permissions(u32);
> +/// /// Represents a single permission.
Newline in between?
> +/// Read = 1 << 0,
> +/// Write = 1 << 1,
> +/// Execute = 1 << 2,
I assume `rustfmt` (in a separate file, i.e. not within the docs
example) would keep that indentation because it is a macro, but please
double-check.
> +/// // Combine multiple permissions using operation OR (`|`).
Should we say "...using the bitwise OR (`|`)" or similar to match
better the usual Rust terms/docs?
I would also update the other cases below, even the negation case to
bitwise NOT for clarity and consistency (the XOR line you have doesn't
follow the pattern anyway).
> +/// let read_write: Permissions = Permission::Read | Permission::Write;
> +///
> +/// assert!(read_write.contains(Permission::Read));
You have a new line here but not in the other examples -- I would just
remove it.
Also, we should probably have one example of an `*Assign` case to show
they are implemented as well.
Thanks!
(By the way, and this in unrelated to Filipe, this thread has quite a
lot of nested levels of quotes -- could we please trim replies a bit
more? It would help reading in e.g. lore.kernel.org)
Cheers,
Miguel
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