netdev - Re: [PATCH] dt-bindings: net: dsa: mediatek,mt7530: Minor grammar fixes

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Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2024 17:29:45 +0100
From: Conor Dooley <conor@...nel.org>
To: Arınç ÜNAL <arinc.unal@...nc9.com>
Cc: Chris Packham <chris.packham@...iedtelesis.co.nz>, andrew@...n.ch,
	f.fainelli@...il.com, olteanv@...il.com, netdev@...r.kernel.org,
	devicetree@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-arm-kernel@...ts.infradead.org,
	linux-mediatek@...ts.infradead.org,
	"David S. Miller" <davem@...emloft.net>,
	Eric Dumazet <edumazet@...gle.com>,
	Jakub Kicinski <kuba@...nel.org>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@...hat.com>,
	Rob Herring <robh@...nel.org>,
	Krzysztof Kozlowski <krzk+dt@...nel.org>,
	Conor Dooley <conor+dt@...nel.org>,
	Matthias Brugger <matthias.bgg@...il.com>,
	AngeloGioacchino Del Regno <angelogioacchino.delregno@...labora.com>,
	Landen Chao <Landen.Chao@...iatek.com>,
	DENG Qingfang <dqfext@...il.com>,
	Sean Wang <sean.wang@...iatek.com>,
	Daniel Golle <daniel@...rotopia.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] dt-bindings: net: dsa: mediatek,mt7530: Minor grammar
 fixes

On Mon, Jun 24, 2024 at 10:00:25AM +0300, Arınç ÜNAL wrote:
> On 24/06/2024 05.58, Chris Packham wrote:
> > Update the mt7530 binding with some minor updates that make the document
> > easier to read.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Chris Packham <chris.packham@...iedtelesis.co.nz>
> > ---
> > 
> > Notes:
> >      I was referring to this dt binding and found a couple of places where
> >      the wording could be improved. I'm not exactly a techical writer but
> >      hopefully I've made things a bit better.
> > 
> >   .../devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml        | 6 +++---
> >   1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
> > index 1c2444121e60..6c0abb020631 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
> > +++ b/Documentation/devicetree/bindings/net/dsa/mediatek,mt7530.yaml
> > @@ -22,16 +22,16 @@ description: |
> >     The MT7988 SoC comes with a built-in switch similar to MT7531 as well as four
> >     Gigabit Ethernet PHYs. The switch registers are directly mapped into the SoC's
> > -  memory map rather than using MDIO. The switch got an internally connected 10G
> > +  memory map rather than using MDIO. The switch has an internally connected 10G
> >     CPU port and 4 user ports connected to the built-in Gigabit Ethernet PHYs.
> > -  MT7530 in MT7620AN, MT7620DA, MT7620DAN and MT7620NN SoCs has got 10/100 PHYs
> > +  MT7530 in MT7620AN, MT7620DA, MT7620DAN and MT7620NN SoCs have 10/100 PHYs
> 
> MT7530 is singular, the sentence is correct as it is.

Actually, the sentence is missing a definite article, so is not correct
as-is.

> 
> >     and the switch registers are directly mapped into SoC's memory map rather than
> >     using MDIO. The DSA driver currently doesn't support MT7620 variants.
> >     There is only the standalone version of MT7531.
> > -  Port 5 on MT7530 has got various ways of configuration:
> > +  Port 5 on MT7530 supports various configurations:
> 
> This is a rewrite, not a grammar fix.

In both cases "has got" is clumsy wording, "supports" is an improvement
to readability, even if it might not qualify as a grammar fix.

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