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Message-ID: <alpine.LRH.2.00.0907030850500.10242@tundra.namei.org>
Date:	Fri, 3 Jul 2009 08:56:59 +1000 (EST)
From:	James Morris <jmorris@...ei.org>
To:	"Justin P. Mattock" <justinmattock@...il.com>
cc:	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, selinux@...ho.nsa.gov
Subject: Re: [PATCH] SElinux: Fix some typos.

On Thu, 2 Jul 2009, Justin P. Mattock wrote:

> Signed-off-by: Justin P. Mattock <justinmattock@...il.com>
> 
> Fix some typos in some comments.

> -/* The file system's label must be initialized prior to use. */
> +/* The filesystems label must be initialized prior to use. */

Your adding grammertical error's.

> -	 * Note that the setting of hard limits (even to lower them) can be
> +	 * Note: That the setting of hard limits (even to lower them) can be

Please get this patch reviewed by an English speaker.

>   * Description:
>   * Call the NetLabel mechanism to get the security attributes of the given
> - * packet and use those attributes to determine the correct context/SID to
> - * assign to the packet.  Returns zero on success, negative values on failure.
> + * packet and use those attributes to determine the correct context/SID to be
> + * assigned to the packet.  Returns zero on success, negative values on failure.

Eschew the active voice?


- James
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James Morris
<jmorris@...ei.org>
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