linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview

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Message-ID: <20150206132315.724460b0@lwn.net>
Date:	Fri, 6 Feb 2015 13:23:15 -0500
From:	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
To:	Luis de Bethencourt <luis@...ethencourt.com>
Cc:	mchehab@....samsung.com, linux-media@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview

On Fri, 6 Feb 2015 18:17:52 +0000
Luis de Bethencourt <luis@...ethencourt.com> wrote:

> -video streams. Besides usually several of such audio and video streams
> -it also contains data streams with information about the programs
> +video streams. As well as several of such audio and video streams, it
> +usually also contains data streams with information about the programs

Not sure if I see this as an improvement or not; you've changed the
meaning of the sentence a bit.  It also lacks changelog and signoff...

Thanks,

jon
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