| lists.openwall.net | lists / announce owl-users owl-dev john-users john-dev passwdqc-users yescrypt popa3d-users / oss-security kernel-hardening musl sabotage tlsify passwords / crypt-dev xvendor / Bugtraq Full-Disclosure linux-kernel linux-netdev linux-ext4 linux-hardening linux-cve-announce PHC | |
|
Open Source and information security mailing list archives
| ||
|
Date: Fri, 6 Feb 2015 18:27:34 +0000 From: Luis de Bethencourt <luis@...ethencourt.com> To: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net> Cc: mchehab@....samsung.com, linux-media@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] DocBook: grammatical correction on DVB Overview On Fri, Feb 06, 2015 at 01:23:15PM -0500, Jonathan Corbet wrote: > On Fri, 6 Feb 2015 18:17:52 +0000 > Luis de Bethencourt <luis@...ethencourt.com> wrote: > > > -video streams. Besides usually several of such audio and video streams > > -it also contains data streams with information about the programs > > +video streams. As well as several of such audio and video streams, it > > +usually also contains data streams with information about the programs > > Not sure if I see this as an improvement or not; you've changed the > meaning of the sentence a bit. It also lacks changelog and signoff... > > Thanks, > > jon Hi Jon, The original sentence is hard to read, I had to go a few times before I think I understood what it meant. Which might be different from your interpretation. How about?: "Besides several of such audio and video stream, it usually also contains data streams with information about the programs [...]" If this isn't worth it and it is just nitpicking, feel free to drop. Thanks for taking the time to look into this, Luis -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in the body of a message to majordomo@...r.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/
Powered by blists - more mailing lists