linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v8 1/2] Documentation: kdump: remind user of nr

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Message-ID: <20160818064715.GC26001@dhcp-128-65.nay.redhat.com>
Date:	Thu, 18 Aug 2016 14:47:15 +0800
From:	Dave Young <dyoung@...hat.com>
To:	Joe Perches <joe@...ches.com>
Cc:	Zhou Wenjian <zhouwj-fnst@...fujitsu.com>,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, akpm@...ux-foundation.org,
	bhe@...hat.com, vgoyal@...hat.com, corbet@....net,
	kexec@...ts.infradead.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	xlpang@...hat.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH v8 1/2] Documentation: kdump: remind user of nr_cpus

On 08/17/16 at 07:36pm, Joe Perches wrote:
> On Thu, 2016-08-18 at 10:31 +0800, Zhou Wenjian wrote:
> > nr_cpus can help to save memory. So we should remind user of it.
> 
> trivia:
> > diff --git a/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt b/Documentation/kdump/kdump.txt
> []
> > @@ -390,9 +390,11 @@ Notes on loading the dump-capture kernel:
> >  * Boot parameter "1" boots the dump-capture kernel into single-user
> >    mode without networking. If you want networking, use "3".
> >  
> > -* We generally don' have to bring up a SMP kernel just to capture the
> > +* We generally don' have to bring up an SMP kernel just to capture the
> 
> don't or do not
> 

Use do not is better, also need replace 'We' with 'You' to be
consistent with other part.