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Message-ID: <8578e393-2a25-bc52-65ea-599d071387e9@acm.org>
Date: Sun, 24 Oct 2021 14:29:21 -0700
From: Bart Van Assche <bvanassche@....org>
To: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Cc: Alim Akhtar <alim.akhtar@...sung.com>,
Avri Altman <avri.altman@....com>, linux-scsi@...r.kernel.org,
"James E.J. Bottomley" <jejb@...ux.ibm.com>,
"Martin K. Petersen" <martin.petersen@...cle.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] scsi: ufs: clean up the Kconfig file
On 10/23/21 23:43, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> @@ -39,7 +38,7 @@ config SCSI_UFSHCD
> select DEVFREQ_GOV_SIMPLE_ONDEMAND
> select NLS
> help
> - This selects the support for UFS devices in Linux, say Y and make
> + This selects the support for UFS devices in Linux. Say Y and make
How about changing "This selects the support for UFS devices in Linux"
into "Enables support for UFS devices"? "the" should be left out from a
grammatical point of view and "in Linux" is redundant.
> sure that you know the name of your UFS host adapter (the card
> inside your computer that "speaks" the UFS protocol, also
> called UFS Host Controller), because you will be asked for it.
> @@ -51,7 +50,7 @@ config SCSI_UFSHCD
> (the one containing the directory /) is located on a UFS device.
>
> config SCSI_UFSHCD_PCI
> - tristate "PCI bus based UFS Controller support"
> + tristate "PCI bus-based UFS Controller support"
Even with this change applied capitalization is inconsistent.
Thanks,
Bart.
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