linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation

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Message-ID: <d785f8aa-5a41-006d-394c-2bba64047cb4@infradead.org>
Date:   Fri, 26 Aug 2022 16:06:14 -0700
From:   Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
To:     Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@...ray.eu>, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Cc:     Conor.Dooley@...rochip.com, Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>,
        linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation

Hi Jules,

On 8/26/22 09:56, Jules Maselbas wrote:
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> index f1f4e6a85a29..6a0c2cc722eb 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
>  monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications.  For example, a port moved into a
>  bond will see it's upper master change.  If that bond is moved into a bridge,
>  the bond's upper master will change.  And so on.  The driver will track such
> -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by

I don't think any change is needed here.
The rest look good to me.

>  registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.


> There are likely more duplicated words.

/methinks that you have barely scratched the surface.  :)

-- 
~Randy