linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole documentation

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Date:   Mon, 29 Aug 2022 11:26:37 +0200
From:   Jules Maselbas <jmaselbas@...ray.eu>
To:     Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@...radead.org>
Cc:     linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Conor.Dooley@...rochip.com,
        Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@...il.com>, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v4] Remove duplicated words across the whole
 documentation

Hi Randy,

On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 04:06:14PM -0700, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> Hi Jules,
> 
> On 8/26/22 09:56, Jules Maselbas wrote:
> > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > index f1f4e6a85a29..6a0c2cc722eb 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/networking/switchdev.rst
> > @@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ The switchdev driver can know a particular port's position in the topology by
> >  monitoring NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER notifications.  For example, a port moved into a
> >  bond will see it's upper master change.  If that bond is moved into a bridge,
> >  the bond's upper master will change.  And so on.  The driver will track such
> > -movements to know what position a port is in in the overall topology by
> > +movements to know what position a port is in the overall topology by
> 
> I don't think any change is needed here.
> The rest look good to me.
You're right.

> 
> >  registering for netdevice events and acting on NETDEV_CHANGEUPPER.
> 
> 
> > There are likely more duplicated words.
> 
> /methinks that you have barely scratched the surface.  :)
yeah... "am doing my part" ;)

Thanks for your time, will send a v5 shortly