linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] PCI: Fixed spelling in Documentation/PCI/pci.rst

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Message-ID: <i432epqedna43bnow5twmm7bdf7dlms54kt5xjewalf5koamks@6kn4bx5lrubz>
Date: Fri, 6 Sep 2024 23:04:19 +0530
From: Abdul Rahim <abdul.rahim@...ahoo.com>
To: Bjorn Helgaas <helgaas@...nel.org>
Cc: corbet@....net, bhelgaas@...gle.com, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, 
	linux-pci@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, abdul.rahim@...ahoo.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH] PCI: Fixed spelling in Documentation/PCI/pci.rst

On Fri, Sep 06, 2024 at 11:41:52AM GMT, Bjorn Helgaas wrote:
> On Fri, Sep 06, 2024 at 06:15:18PM +0530, Abdul Rahim wrote:
> > Fixed spelling and edited for clarity.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Abdul Rahim <abdul.rahim@...ahoo.com>
> > ---
> >  Documentation/PCI/pci.rst | 2 +-
> >  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/PCI/pci.rst b/Documentation/PCI/pci.rst
> > index dd7b1c0c21da..344c2c2d94f9 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/PCI/pci.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/PCI/pci.rst
> > @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ driver generally needs to perform the following initialization:
> >    - Enable DMA/processing engines
> >  
> >  When done using the device, and perhaps the module needs to be unloaded,
> > -the driver needs to take the follow steps:
> > +the driver needs to perform the following steps:
> 
> I don't see a spelling fix here, and personally I wouldn't bother with
> changing "take" to "perform" unless we have other more significant
> changes to make at the same time.

- "follow" has been corrected to "following", which is more appriopriate
in this context.
- I know its trivial, but can disturb the readers flow
- do you want me to change the message to "Edited for clarity"