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Date: Wed, 11 Sep 2024 17:10:25 +0200
From: "Guilherme G. Piccoli" <gpiccoli@...lia.com>
To: Simon Horman <horms@...nel.org>
Cc: kexec@...ts.infradead.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org, bhe@...hat.com,
corbet@....net, kernel@...ccoli.net, linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org,
stephen.s.brennan@...cle.com, kernel-dev@...lia.com, dyoung@...hat.com,
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Subject: Re: [PATCH V2] Documentation: Improve crash_kexec_post_notifiers
description
On 02/09/2024 10:23, Simon Horman wrote:
>
> Hi Guilherme,
>
> Some subjective grammar nits.
>
>> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> index efc52ddc6864..351730108c58 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.txt
>> @@ -913,12 +913,16 @@
>> the parameter has no effect.
>>
>> crash_kexec_post_notifiers
>> - Run kdump after running panic-notifiers and dumping
>> - kmsg. This only for the users who doubt kdump always
>> - succeeds in any situation.
>> - Note that this also increases risks of kdump failure,
>> - because some panic notifiers can make the crashed
>> - kernel more unstable.
>> + Only jump to kdump kernel after running the panic
>> + notifiers and dumping kmsg. This option increases the
>> + risks of a kdump failure, since some panic notifiers
>> + can make the crashed kernel more unstable. In the
>
> nit: In the configurations -> In configurations
>
>> + configurations where kdump may not be reliable,
>> + running the panic notifiers can allow collecting more
>> + data on dmesg, like stack traces from other CPUS or
>> + extra data dumped by panic_print. Notice that some
>
> nit: Notice that -> Note that
>
>> + code enables this option unconditionally, like
>
> Maybe: some code enables -> some configurations enable
>
Hey Simon, tnx for the suggestions, will change in the next version.
Cheers,
Guilherme
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