linux-kernel - [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

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Message-Id: <20241107013849.47833-1-xandfury@gmail.com>
Date: Wed,  6 Nov 2024 18:38:49 -0700
From: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@...il.com>
To: linux-kernel-mentees@...ts.linuxfoundation.org,
	linux-hwmon@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org
Cc: Jean Delvare <jdelvare@...e.com>,
	Guenter Roeck <linux@...ck-us.net>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>,
	Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@...il.com>
Subject: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
- Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
 clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
- Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
 verb agreement and adjective form
- Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
 complex explanation into simpler parts
- Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
- Remove redundant "at" in temperature description

No functional changes, documentation only.

Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@...il.com>
---
 Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst
index 38e30fbd4806..53d32bf06b70 100644
--- a/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst
+++ b/Documentation/hwmon/f71882fg.rst
@@ -178,10 +178,11 @@ Writing an unsupported mode will result in an invalid parameter error.
   available on the F71858FG / F8000 if the fan channel is in RPM mode.
 
 * 2: Normal auto mode
-  You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points, which % the
-  fan should run at at this temp and which temp a fan should follow using the
-  standard sysfs interface. The number and type of trip points is chip
-  depended, see which files are available in sysfs.
+  You can define a number of temperature/fan speed trip points that specify
+  the percentage at which the fan should run at each temperature, and which
+  temperature sensor a fan should follow, using the standard sysfs interface.
+  The number and type of trip points are chip dependent - see the available
+  files in sysfs.
   Fan/PWM channel 3 of the F8000 is always in this mode!
 
 * 3: Thermostat mode (Only available on the F8000 when in duty cycle mode)
-- 
2.37.3