linux-kernel - Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip points explanation

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Message-ID: <07b90400-7f6b-478d-80af-c7e71ac205de@roeck-us.net>
Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2024 16:52:14 -0800
From: Guenter Roeck <linux@...ck-us.net>
To: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@...il.com>
Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@...ts.linuxfoundation.org,
	linux-hwmon@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Jean Delvare <jdelvare@...e.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] hwmon: Documentation: Fix grammar in fan speed trip
 points explanation

On Wed, Nov 06, 2024 at 06:38:49PM -0700, Abhinav Saxena wrote:
> Fix several grammatical issues in the fan speed trip points documentation:
> - Replace awkward "which % the fan should run at at" construction with
>  clearer "that specify the percentage at which"
> - Fix incorrect "is chip depended" to "are chip dependent" for correct
>  verb agreement and adjective form
> - Improve readability by reorganizing first sentence and separating the
>  complex explanation into simpler parts
> - Add hyphen before "see" to improve readability
> - Remove redundant "at" in temperature description
> 
> No functional changes, documentation only.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Abhinav Saxena <xandfury@...il.com>

Applied, after fixing the subject (which needs to include the affected
driver).

Thanks,
Guenter