netdev - Re: [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE documentation issue

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Message-ID: <20240912080929.GD572255@kernel.org>
Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:09:29 +0100
From: Simon Horman <horms@...nel.org>
To: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@...tlin.com>
Cc: netdev@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Jakub Kicinski <kuba@...nel.org>,
	Oleksij Rempel <o.rempel@...gutronix.de>,
	thomas.petazzoni@...tlin.com,
	"David S. Miller" <davem@...emloft.net>,
	Eric Dumazet <edumazet@...gle.com>, Paolo Abeni <pabeni@...hat.com>,
	Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE
 documentation issue

On Wed, Sep 11, 2024 at 04:47:11PM +0200, Kory Maincent wrote:
> Fix a missing end of phrase in the documentation. It describes the
> ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW attribute, which was not fully explained.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@...tlin.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst | 5 +++--
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> index ba90457b8b2d..b1390878ba84 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> @@ -1801,8 +1801,9 @@ the PSE and the PD. This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022``
>  30.9.1.1.8 aPSEPowerClassification.
>  
>  When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW`` attribute identifies
> -This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActualPower.
> -Actual power is reported in mW.
> +the actual power drawn by the C33 PSE. This option is corresponding to

nit: While we are here, perhaps we can also update the grammar.

     This attribute corresponds to...

> +``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23 aPSEActualPower. Actual power is reported
> +in mW.
>  
>  When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_EXT_STATE`` attribute identifies
>  the extended error state of the C33 PSE. Possible values are:
> -- 
> 2.34.1
> 
>