netdev - Re: [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE documentation issue

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Message-ID: <20240912105921.3bf04996@kmaincent-XPS-13-7390>
Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2024 10:59:21 +0200
From: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@...tlin.com>
To: Simon Horman <horms@...nel.org>
Cc: netdev@...r.kernel.org, linux-doc@...r.kernel.org,
 linux-kernel@...r.kernel.org, Jakub Kicinski <kuba@...nel.org>, Oleksij
 Rempel <o.rempel@...gutronix.de>, thomas.petazzoni@...tlin.com, "David S.
 Miller" <davem@...emloft.net>, Eric Dumazet <edumazet@...gle.com>, Paolo
 Abeni <pabeni@...hat.com>, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@....net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH net-next] Documentation: networking: Fix missing PSE
 documentation issue

On Thu, 12 Sep 2024 09:09:29 +0100
Simon Horman <horms@...nel.org> wrote:

> On Wed, Sep 11, 2024 at 04:47:11PM +0200, Kory Maincent wrote:
> > Fix a missing end of phrase in the documentation. It describes the
> > ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW attribute, which was not fully explained.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Kory Maincent <kory.maincent@...tlin.com>
> > ---
> >  Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst | 5 +++--
> >  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst
> > b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst index
> > ba90457b8b2d..b1390878ba84 100644 ---
> > a/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst +++
> > b/Documentation/networking/ethtool-netlink.rst @@ -1801,8 +1801,9 @@ the
> > PSE and the PD. This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022``
> > 30.9.1.1.8 aPSEPowerClassification. 
> >  When set, the optional ``ETHTOOL_A_C33_PSE_ACTUAL_PW`` attribute identifies
> > -This option is corresponding to ``IEEE 802.3-2022`` 30.9.1.1.23
> > aPSEActualPower. -Actual power is reported in mW.
> > +the actual power drawn by the C33 PSE. This option is corresponding to  
> 
> nit: While we are here, perhaps we can also update the grammar.
> 
>      This attribute corresponds to...

Yes, indeed. Thanks.

Regards,
-- 
Köry Maincent, Bootlin
Embedded Linux and kernel engineering
https://bootlin.com